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作文在英语六级考试中占有非常重要的位置，但是很多考生在备考时总会发现自己写的句子不够精彩。那么在最后的备考时间里，各位考生应该多看范文，学习范文中的词汇和语句，这样能够提高复习效率，在考试中取得好成绩。
题目：On Blind-date Show
1、 目前电视相亲节目很流行
2、 出现这种现象的原因是：
3、 我对此的看法
高分作文+点评：
高分作文：
Turning on TV, you can watch blind-date shows on many channels. According to survey, such program ranks among top three for all age groups, becoming a necessary part of their life.
This phenomenon, first of all, reflexes the change of mind about love and date, which used to be serious and private. Nowadays, love can be discussed and showed in public and most people, especially youngsters, regard date as a kind of entertainment or game. In addition, there is an increasing number of single men and women, due to their narrow network, haveto resort to blind-date show. Another notable trend is that advertisements find such programs as excellent platform to show their products such as perfume, dresses and cosmetics. They are therefore willing to sponsor.
In my opinion, blind date shows do not truly help people in establishing relationship and getting someone to get married. As far as I know, many people are like actors and actresses, whose job is to recite scripts they are given. These programs may, to great degree, ruin the purity of love in the long run.
点评：
高分作文!!!
划线句子里，is是句子的谓语动词了，因此就不能再用have了，要么你去掉there be，要么把后面的have改成having.
作文在英语六级考试中占有非常重要的位置，但是很多考生在备考时总会发现自己写的句子不够精彩。那么在最后的备考时间里，各位考生应该多看范文，学习范文中的词汇和语句，这样能够提高复习效率，在考试中取得好成绩。
题目：On Blind-date Show
1、 目前电视相亲节目很流行
2、 出现这种现象的原因是：
3、 我对此的看法
高分作文+点评：
高分作文：
Turning on TV, you can watch blind-date shows on many channels. According to survey, such program ranks among top three for all age groups, becoming a necessary part of their life.
This phenomenon, first of all, reflexes the change of mind about love and date, which used to be serious and private. Nowadays, love can be discussed and showed in public and most people, especially youngsters, regard date as a kind of entertainment or game. In addition, there is an increasing number of single men and women, due to their narrow network, haveto resort to blind-date show. Another notable trend is that advertisements find such programs as excellent platform to show their products such as perfume, dresses and cosmetics. They are therefore willing to sponsor.
In my opinion, blind date shows do not truly help people in establishing relationship and getting someone to get married. As far as I know, many people are like actors and actresses, whose job is to recite scripts they are given. These programs may, to great degree, ruin the purity of love in the long run.
点评：
高分作文!!!
划线句子里，is是句子的谓语动词了，因此就不能再用have了，要么你去掉there be，要么把后面的have改成having.
