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高分句式一 短句拉长
在考研英语作文中,任何短句都可以拉长为长句,而且,从理论上讲,一个句子的长度可以是无限的,但是出于实际情况,大家要学会写有限度的长句。
虽然《考试大纲》没有明确规定考研作文中长句的长度和数量,但是基于考研作文实战的需要,考生需要有一种长句设置意识,即通过在文中设置若干个长句,向阅卷者展示考生对于复杂语言的掌握能力,从而征服阅卷者的心,获得满意的分数。
短句拉长的写作要领:
名词:+形容词,+同位语,+定语从句
动词:+状语(时间、地点、目的、方式)
例句实战:
例1、Officialshavebuilt highways.(4个单词)
Inrecent years,the responsible,hard-working andwarm-hearted officials have built a great number of highwayswhich have broughtmuch convenience to the local citizens. (拉长后25单词)
例1中短句拉长的步骤:
1)在句首,加上时间状语inrecent yeas
2)在名词officials前面加上responsible,hard-working,warm-hearted 三个形容词修饰它
3)在名词highways后面加上定语从句whichhave brought much convenience to the local citizens.
例2、Factorieshavedischarged gas and liquid.(6个单词)
Inthe developed areas,the newly-built chemicalfactories have discharged harmful and even poisonousgas and liquid which had aseriously negatively impact on the surroundingenvironment.(拉长后31个单词)
例2中短句拉长的步骤:
1)在句首,加上地点状语in the developed areas
2)在名词factories前面加上两个修饰形容词newly-built和chemical
3)在名词gas and liquid 后面上加上一个定语从句whichhad a seriously negatively impact on the surroundingenvironment.
高分句式二插入语
增加句式复杂性的另外一种方法就是使用插入语。中国学生写的英语句子喜欢一通到底,没有任何语气的间歇,像一根笔直的竹竿,因此笔者称之为竹竿句。而英美人士写的句子则不同,他们偏爱插入语,通过插入语表现出作者语气的间歇和停顿。有了插入语,读者眼中的句子有一种跌宕起伏的感觉,这种句子像海浪一起忽起忽落,笔者称这种句子为海浪句。试比较:
Ancientmen made tools of stone. For instance, they always usedflint becauseit is easier to shape than other kinds. (不使用插入语)
Fortunately,however,ancient men made tools ofstone,especially flint,because it is easier to shape than other kinds. (使用插入语)
我们用图形表示这两个句子,如下:
第一句:竹竿句
howeverespecial
第二句:海浪句
由此我们看出:地道的英语句子要写得跌宕起伏。
考研的同学要在语言上下功夫,就必须学会写作海浪句,从而使得自己的作文波涛汹涌,错落有致。
插入语的写作要领:
1)插入语可以是一个词,一个短语,或者一个句子。
2)插入语两边分别用逗号,跟其他成分隔开。
3)插入语最好放在主语之后,便于掌握。
例1:副词插入frankly,especially,fortunately,indeed,however
坦率地说,旅游可以促进国家之间的相互了解。
Tourism,frankly,may promote the mutual understandingamong nations.
例2:短语插入语generally speaking(总的来说),to tell the truth(老实说),in a sense(在某种意义上讲),inaword (总而言之),strangeto say(说来奇怪)
总而言之,家长[微博]不该无视电脑游戏对小孩的副作用。
Parents, in aword,should never lose sight of theside-effects of computer games on their children.
例3:短句插入语Isuppose, as Isee it,I believe,what is important(重要的是)。
重要的是,环境对人的性格有深远影响。
Personality, whatis important,has a far-reachinginfluence on onespersonality.
高分句式三并列修辞
请大家欣赏历史上最精彩的三个并列修辞句式:
凯撒:Icame,Isaw,I conquered.
(我来了,我看到了,我征服了。)
培根:Studiesservefor delight,for ornament,and for ability.
(学习可以怡情,可以博采,可以长才)考研英语写作名师之作
林肯的政治抱负:agovernmentof the people,by the people and for the people.
(民有,民治,民享的政府)
历史上,名人使用并列修辞写出了千古名句,流芳百世;今天,我们也可以使用并列修辞写出精彩句式,创造作文高分奇迹。
并列修辞的写作要领:
用and或者or 连接两个词性相同,意思相近的单词,就构成了并列修辞。
比如:givesupportand assistance to
benefitfrom the education and instruction.
developand promote the economic growth.
并列修辞实战举例:
1)TheAmerican girl,dressedin traditional Chinese costume andornaments,indicatesand symbolizes themultinational communication of cultures and customs.(选自2002年考研作文真题,一句话包含三处并列修辞)
2)It goeswithout saying that the drawings aim atrevealing a common and serious problemin China:how to educate and cultivatethe young. Letstake a closer look at the drawings.In an ideal condition,the flower blooms.But when moved out of the green house, itperishes under the rain and storm. Itis obvious that the flower in greenhousecant withstand wind and rains.(选自2003年考研作文真题,一个段落包含四处并列修辞)
亮点句式是考研阅卷人定档次,给分数的主要凭据,所以同学们应该有意识的多训练自己亮点句式的写作。如果能将本文介绍的三大亮点句式天衣无缝地设置在考研作文当中,整篇作文就会看起来星光闪闪炫人眼目,那么,获得高分也就是水到渠成事情了。
高分句式一 短句拉长
在考研英语作文中,任何短句都可以拉长为长句,而且,从理论上讲,一个句子的长度可以是无限的,但是出于实际情况,大家要学会写有限度的长句。
虽然《考试大纲》没有明确规定考研作文中长句的长度和数量,但是基于考研作文实战的需要,考生需要有一种长句设置意识,即通过在文中设置若干个长句,向阅卷者展示考生对于复杂语言的掌握能力,从而征服阅卷者的心,获得满意的分数。
短句拉长的写作要领:
名词:+形容词,+同位语,+定语从句
动词:+状语(时间、地点、目的、方式)
例句实战:
例1、Officialshavebuilt highways.(4个单词)
Inrecent years,the responsible,hard-working andwarm-hearted officials have built a great number of highwayswhich have broughtmuch convenience to the local citizens. (拉长后25单词)
例1中短句拉长的步骤:
1)在句首,加上时间状语inrecent yeas
2)在名词officials前面加上responsible,hard-working,warm-hearted 三个形容词修饰它
3)在名词highways后面加上定语从句whichhave brought much convenience to the local citizens.
例2、Factorieshavedischarged gas and liquid.(6个单词)
Inthe developed areas,the newly-built chemicalfactories have discharged harmful and even poisonousgas and liquid which had aseriously negatively impact on the surroundingenvironment.(拉长后31个单词)
例2中短句拉长的步骤:
1)在句首,加上地点状语in the developed areas
2)在名词factories前面加上两个修饰形容词newly-built和chemical
3)在名词gas and liquid 后面上加上一个定语从句whichhad a seriously negatively impact on the surroundingenvironment.
高分句式二插入语
增加句式复杂性的另外一种方法就是使用插入语。中国学生写的英语句子喜欢一通到底,没有任何语气的间歇,像一根笔直的竹竿,因此笔者称之为竹竿句。而英美人士写的句子则不同,他们偏爱插入语,通过插入语表现出作者语气的间歇和停顿。有了插入语,读者眼中的句子有一种跌宕起伏的感觉,这种句子像海浪一起忽起忽落,笔者称这种句子为海浪句。试比较:
Ancientmen made tools of stone. For instance, they always usedflint becauseit is easier to shape than other kinds. (不使用插入语)
Fortunately,however,ancient men made tools ofstone,especially flint,because it is easier to shape than other kinds. (使用插入语)
我们用图形表示这两个句子,如下:
第一句:竹竿句
howeverespecial
第二句:海浪句
由此我们看出:地道的英语句子要写得跌宕起伏。
考研的同学要在语言上下功夫,就必须学会写作海浪句,从而使得自己的作文波涛汹涌,错落有致。
插入语的写作要领:
1)插入语可以是一个词,一个短语,或者一个句子。
2)插入语两边分别用逗号,跟其他成分隔开。
3)插入语最好放在主语之后,便于掌握。
例1:副词插入frankly,especially,fortunately,indeed,however
坦率地说,旅游可以促进国家之间的相互了解。
Tourism,frankly,may promote the mutual understandingamong nations.
例2:短语插入语generally speaking(总的来说),to tell the truth(老实说),in a sense(在某种意义上讲),inaword (总而言之),strangeto say(说来奇怪)
总而言之,家长[微博]不该无视电脑游戏对小孩的副作用。
Parents, in aword,should never lose sight of theside-effects of computer games on their children.
例3:短句插入语Isuppose, as Isee it,I believe,what is important(重要的是)。
重要的是,环境对人的性格有深远影响。
Personality, whatis important,has a far-reachinginfluence on onespersonality.
高分句式三并列修辞
请大家欣赏历史上最精彩的三个并列修辞句式:
凯撒:Icame,Isaw,I conquered.
(我来了,我看到了,我征服了。)
培根:Studiesservefor delight,for ornament,and for ability.
(学习可以怡情,可以博采,可以长才)考研英语写作名师之作
林肯的政治抱负:agovernmentof the people,by the people and for the people.
(民有,民治,民享的政府)
历史上,名人使用并列修辞写出了千古名句,流芳百世;今天,我们也可以使用并列修辞写出精彩句式,创造作文高分奇迹。
并列修辞的写作要领:
用and或者or 连接两个词性相同,意思相近的单词,就构成了并列修辞。
比如:givesupportand assistance to
benefitfrom the education and instruction.
developand promote the economic growth.
并列修辞实战举例:
1)TheAmerican girl,dressedin traditional Chinese costume andornaments,indicatesand symbolizes themultinational communication of cultures and customs.(选自2002年考研作文真题,一句话包含三处并列修辞)
2)It goeswithout saying that the drawings aim atrevealing a common and serious problemin China:how to educate and cultivatethe young. Letstake a closer look at the drawings.In an ideal condition,the flower blooms.But when moved out of the green house, itperishes under the rain and storm. Itis obvious that the flower in greenhousecant withstand wind and rains.(选自2003年考研作文真题,一个段落包含四处并列修辞)
亮点句式是考研阅卷人定档次,给分数的主要凭据,所以同学们应该有意识的多训练自己亮点句式的写作。如果能将本文介绍的三大亮点句式天衣无缝地设置在考研作文当中,整篇作文就会看起来星光闪闪炫人眼目,那么,获得高分也就是水到渠成事情了。