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揭阳市2024高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（9）附参考范文
(201*石家庄质检)
I am a very active girl in my class. I have many hobby，1.________
such as writing stories, playing piano and singing English2.________
songs. My most favorite subject is English.
I became3.________
interested in it when I was very young. My dream is 4.________
to study abroad. But now I need to improve my English5.________
and learn more about west culture as well. I will be6.________
able to improving the friendship between China and7.________
the rest of the world. I hoped my dream will come true.8.________
And I believe in nobody can change my mind. I will work9.________
harder and follow my heart, no matter how happens！10.________
答案与解析：
1．hobby→hobbies many后接复数名词，下文such as后列举的内容也是提示。
2．piano前加the play the piano表示“弹钢琴”，是固定搭配。西洋乐器类名词前常用定冠词the。
3．去掉most favorite本身就是“最喜爱的”，因此原句语义重复。
4．√
5．But→So 前后逻辑上是因果而不是转折关系。
6．west→western 依据语境这里表示“西方文化”，应用形容词western作定语。
7．improving→improve be able to do sth.表示“能够做某事”。
8．hoped→hope 这里表示说话人现在的愿望，故应用一般现在时。
9．去掉in I believe that..我相信……。believe in表示“信任，信仰”，其后不能接从句。
10．how→what no matter what happens无论发生什么，what充当从句的主语。
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作文（***）
今年5月31日是第21个世界无烟日，英文21世纪报计划举办一次征艾比赛，主
1．绝大部分青少年吸烟者认为暖姻蓝禧粳酷，氆禾套马上对身体产生危害，只要
2．请你驳斥这种观点，应包含以下信息：吸烟浪费金钱，浑身气味，牙齿肮脏，上瘾
3．提出一些帮助人们戒烟的建议(至少60词)。
注意：词数120～150，文章标题已绘出，不计入总词数。
Smoking is Not Cool and Quit NowOne possible version：
Smoking is Not Cool and Quit Now
Most young smokers say smoking is cool and doesn’t hurt us fight now．People can just stop before it gets dangerous．
But in my opinion，smoking is not cool at all．In addition to the waste of money，smoking makes you smell bad and makes your teeth dirty．Being addicted to cigarettes will poison your bedy with cancer causing by—products．Dying of lung and heart disease or cancer won’t promote your popularityDon’t quit until it's too late-smoking begins to damage your body the moment you start．
To quit you should first set a date and quit COMPLETELY on that day．Then find out the times you are most likely to smoke and make a plan about what you'll do instead of smoking at those times．For example，take a walk when feeling stressed．Take exercise to resist the desire to smoke．Let your friends give you a help reminding you if necessary．
2．可适当增加细节，以使文章连贯。
3．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter，
I'm
glad to learn that you and your family are coming to settle down in China．
Nevertheless，this is only my suggestion and it's up to you to decide．Hope to hear from you again．
Yours，
Hua
One possible version：
May l7,20 Dear Peter,．
’m so glad to learn that you and your family are coming to settle down in China．After a careful study of the information about the two cities，I suggest you choose to live in City A．First of all，the climate in City A is more pleasant than that in City B．As we all know，good climate will benefit our health．Besides．there are many places for entertainment where you can enjoy yourselves in your spare time．After all，both cities are almost equally favorable in safety．As for the employment，though the job opportunities are not so good as those in City B，yet I don’t think it’s a problem for you as a teacher of English．If I should choose， would live in City A．
Nevertheless,this is only my suggestion and it's up to you to decide．Hope to hear from youn．
Yours
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(201*·成都检测)
My father and I am taking a camping trip in July1.________
and August. We will travel for about two months but2.________
will tour the United States and parts of the Canada. We3.__ ______
have decided to camp because it does not spend as much4.________
as vacationing in hotels, but we had to plan carefully. I5.________
think the car what we are going to drive is very small, so6.________
we decide to take only one small suitcase for both of them7.________
and as few camping things as possibly. We will take some8.________
medicine with us prevent insects from hurting us, and also9.________
some food for picnics. I'm sure that we will have fun.10.________
答案与解析：
1．am→are 本句的主句是my father and I，所以谓语动词用复数形式。
2．but→and 此处表示的是顺承关系，而不是转折关系。
3．删去第二个the 一般情况下，表示国家的单个词语前不加冠词。
4．spend→cost 本句的主语不是人，而是it，所以用cost。
5．had→have 短文全篇叙述的都是现在和将来的情况。
6．what→that/which或删去what “that/which we are going to drive”是定语从句，修饰先行词the car，关系代词在从句中作宾语，可以省略。
7．them→us 根据文章的开头部分可知这里指的是作者本人和作者的父亲，因此应用us。
8．possibly→possible as...as possible表示“尽可能……”。
9．prevent前加to 此处是不定式短语作目的状语。
10．√
作文（***）
最近你校对中学生消费情况进行了调查；请根据调查表提供的信息写一篇英语短左右。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
One possible version：
As can be seen from the diagram above，nowadays middle sch．ool students spend most of their pocket money on snacks，clothes，things for entertainment and social communication．However，they seldom buy learning resources．Furthermoreme of them are free to buy whatever they like without considering the income of their family and their needs．
In my opinion，it's wrong of us students to consume blindly．such as following the fashion，pursuing famous brands of clothes,As we know，once seeking material comforts，we will lose the motivation of learnin．Therefore，we should spend our pocket money on what we really need．Als，we should acquire a scientific outlook of consumption and focus on study．What's more，it's essential for us to develop a
habit of saving money．
(201*·河南五校联考)
After I finished the school this year, I began to1.________
look for work. Now several month later, I still hadn't 2.________
found the job that I was interested. Last Sunday morning，3.________
I received a phone call from a man calling him Mr. Smith.4.________
He said to me on the phone, “I hear you do very well in your5.________
studies. I may provide a job for you.” I entered 6.________
his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I 7.________
will go through the jobhunting talk today and he would8.________
take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised, 9.________
what he said disappointing. He only needed a model.10.________
答案与解析：
1．去掉the finish school是固定搭配，表示“毕业”。
2．month→months month是可数名词，several暗示应用复数形式。
3．interested后加in be interested in是固定搭配，表示“对……感兴趣”。
4．him→himself calling himself Mr. Smith短语作定语，修饰a man表示“自称Mr. Smith”的男子。
5．do→did 根据逻辑可知这里表示毕业前的情况，故用一般过去时。do well in“干得好”。
6．√
7．beaten→beating a beating heart“忐忑不安的心”。
8．will→would 这里应考虑主从句时态的呼应，故用过去将来时。
9．surprised→surprise to one's surprise是固定搭配，表示“令某人惊讶的是”。
10．said后加was what he said是主语从句，“他的话是令人失望的”。句子缺少系动词。
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揭阳市2024高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（9）附参考范文
(201*石家庄质检)
I am a very active girl in my class. I have many hobby，1.________
such as writing stories, playing piano and singing English2.________
songs. My most favorite subject is English.
I became3.________
interested in it when I was very young. My dream is 4.________
to study abroad. But now I need to improve my English5.________
and learn more about west culture as well. I will be6.________
able to improving the friendship between China and7.________
the rest of the world. I hoped my dream will come true.8.________
And I believe in nobody can change my mind. I will work9.________
harder and follow my heart, no matter how happens！10.________
答案与解析：
1．hobby→hobbies many后接复数名词，下文such as后列举的内容也是提示。
2．piano前加the play the piano表示“弹钢琴”，是固定搭配。西洋乐器类名词前常用定冠词the。
3．去掉most favorite本身就是“最喜爱的”，因此原句语义重复。
4．√
5．But→So 前后逻辑上是因果而不是转折关系。
6．west→western 依据语境这里表示“西方文化”，应用形容词western作定语。
7．improving→improve be able to do sth.表示“能够做某事”。
8．hoped→hope 这里表示说话人现在的愿望，故应用一般现在时。
9．去掉in I believe that..我相信……。believe in表示“信任，信仰”，其后不能接从句。
10．how→what no matter what happens无论发生什么，what充当从句的主语。
*******************************************************结束
作文（***）
今年5月31日是第21个世界无烟日，英文21世纪报计划举办一次征艾比赛，主
1．绝大部分青少年吸烟者认为暖姻蓝禧粳酷，氆禾套马上对身体产生危害，只要
2．请你驳斥这种观点，应包含以下信息：吸烟浪费金钱，浑身气味，牙齿肮脏，上瘾
3．提出一些帮助人们戒烟的建议(至少60词)。
注意：词数120～150，文章标题已绘出，不计入总词数。
Smoking is Not Cool and Quit NowOne possible version：
Smoking is Not Cool and Quit Now
Most young smokers say smoking is cool and doesn’t hurt us fight now．People can just stop before it gets dangerous．
But in my opinion，smoking is not cool at all．In addition to the waste of money，smoking makes you smell bad and makes your teeth dirty．Being addicted to cigarettes will poison your bedy with cancer causing by—products．Dying of lung and heart disease or cancer won’t promote your popularityDon’t quit until it's too late-smoking begins to damage your body the moment you start．
To quit you should first set a date and quit COMPLETELY on that day．Then find out the times you are most likely to smoke and make a plan about what you'll do instead of smoking at those times．For example，take a walk when feeling stressed．Take exercise to resist the desire to smoke．Let your friends give you a help reminding you if necessary．
2．可适当增加细节，以使文章连贯。
3．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter，
I'm
glad to learn that you and your family are coming to settle down in China．
Nevertheless，this is only my suggestion and it's up to you to decide．Hope to hear from you again．
Yours，
Hua
One possible version：
May l7,20 Dear Peter,．
’m so glad to learn that you and your family are coming to settle down in China．After a careful study of the information about the two cities，I suggest you choose to live in City A．First of all，the climate in City A is more pleasant than that in City B．As we all know，good climate will benefit our health．Besides．there are many places for entertainment where you can enjoy yourselves in your spare time．After all，both cities are almost equally favorable in safety．As for the employment，though the job opportunities are not so good as those in City B，yet I don’t think it’s a problem for you as a teacher of English．If I should choose， would live in City A．
Nevertheless,this is only my suggestion and it's up to you to decide．Hope to hear from youn．
Yours
**************************************************************结束
(201*·成都检测)
My father and I am taking a camping trip in July1.________
and August. We will travel for about two months but2.________
will tour the United States and parts of the Canada. We3.__ ______
have decided to camp because it does not spend as much4.________
as vacationing in hotels, but we had to plan carefully. I5.________
think the car what we are going to drive is very small, so6.________
we decide to take only one small suitcase for both of them7.________
and as few camping things as possibly. We will take some8.________
medicine with us prevent insects from hurting us, and also9.________
some food for picnics. I'm sure that we will have fun.10.________
答案与解析：
1．am→are 本句的主句是my father and I，所以谓语动词用复数形式。
2．but→and 此处表示的是顺承关系，而不是转折关系。
3．删去第二个the 一般情况下，表示国家的单个词语前不加冠词。
4．spend→cost 本句的主语不是人，而是it，所以用cost。
5．had→have 短文全篇叙述的都是现在和将来的情况。
6．what→that/which或删去what “that/which we are going to drive”是定语从句，修饰先行词the car，关系代词在从句中作宾语，可以省略。
7．them→us 根据文章的开头部分可知这里指的是作者本人和作者的父亲，因此应用us。
8．possibly→possible as...as possible表示“尽可能……”。
9．prevent前加to 此处是不定式短语作目的状语。
10．√
作文（***）
最近你校对中学生消费情况进行了调查；请根据调查表提供的信息写一篇英语短左右。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
One possible version：
As can be seen from the diagram above，nowadays middle sch．ool students spend most of their pocket money on snacks，clothes，things for entertainment and social communication．However，they seldom buy learning resources．Furthermoreme of them are free to buy whatever they like without considering the income of their family and their needs．
In my opinion，it's wrong of us students to consume blindly．such as following the fashion，pursuing famous brands of clothes,As we know，once seeking material comforts，we will lose the motivation of learnin．Therefore，we should spend our pocket money on what we really need．Als，we should acquire a scientific outlook of consumption and focus on study．What's more，it's essential for us to develop a
habit of saving money．
(201*·河南五校联考)
After I finished the school this year, I began to1.________
look for work. Now several month later, I still hadn't 2.________
found the job that I was interested. Last Sunday morning，3.________
I received a phone call from a man calling him Mr. Smith.4.________
He said to me on the phone, “I hear you do very well in your5.________
studies. I may provide a job for you.” I entered 6.________
his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I 7.________
will go through the jobhunting talk today and he would8.________
take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised, 9.________
what he said disappointing. He only needed a model.10.________
答案与解析：
1．去掉the finish school是固定搭配，表示“毕业”。
2．month→months month是可数名词，several暗示应用复数形式。
3．interested后加in be interested in是固定搭配，表示“对……感兴趣”。
4．him→himself calling himself Mr. Smith短语作定语，修饰a man表示“自称Mr. Smith”的男子。
5．do→did 根据逻辑可知这里表示毕业前的情况，故用一般过去时。do well in“干得好”。
6．√
7．beaten→beating a beating heart“忐忑不安的心”。
8．will→would 这里应考虑主从句时态的呼应，故用过去将来时。
9．surprised→surprise to one's surprise是固定搭配，表示“令某人惊讶的是”。
10．said后加was what he said是主语从句，“他的话是令人失望的”。句子缺少系动词。
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