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揭阳市2024高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（3）附参考范文
短文改错---- (2010·河北部分重点联考)
Dear Anish，
Here are the information about Manchester University.1.________
It is about 200 miles far away from London, and it 2.________
has a very big schoolyard. You can live in the school3.________
or near the school. They have all sorts of course.4.________
I'm sure you will find one you like it. I know you5.________
are particular interested in human rights. So I will 6.________
see that there is anything on their website(网址).7.________
I'll send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport8.________
when you arrived. You met him a few years ago, but he 9.________
has changed a lot since then. Both your aunt or I look10.________
forward to seeing you again.
See you soon.
Peter
答案与解析：
1．are→is information是不可数名词，谓语动词应使用单数形式。
2．去掉far far通常不与表示具体距离的数词连用。
3．√
4．course→courses 根据句中的all sorts of可知，这里要表示的是各种各样的课程，因此应用复数形式。
5．去掉it “(that) you like”是定语从句，修饰先行词one。在从句中，关系代词that作like的宾语，所以it多余。
6．particular→particularly interested是形容词，应使用副词修饰。
7．that→if/whether 根据上一句中的内容可知这里的意思是看网络上“是否”有相关信息。
8．meet前加to 此处是不定式表示目的。
9．arrived→arrive 如果主句是一般将来时，时间状语从句通常用一般现在时。
10．or→and 此处是“both...and...”结构，表示“两者都”。“Have you taken medicine ?”
解析：根据句意，是妈妈问：故为主动语态。
短文改错--------------缺词
缺词一般为：冠词/连词/介词/系词be 助词/
【1】缺介词
*He was looking for a glass ^the cupboard (in)
解析：根据句意，in the cupboard 做状语。
【2】缺冠词
*However, the popular teacher is at^ same time the one who should be strict with students.(the)
解析：形容词same 和the 搭配使用,故给same前加 the。
【3】缺连接词
*In one class, I learned^ it rained
(why)
解析：根据句子意思可知，缺连接词，句意为：“在一节课上，我知道了下雨的原因”。
【4】缺系词
*What ^your favorite sport ?
(is)
解析：句子中缺系词，在What加is.
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高考英语书面表达讲义：要点作文
(3)(25 min.)
(2024·益阳一中月考)假如你是李明，你同学李华来信说自己每次遇到重要考试，都会出现一些焦虑症状。请你用英语写一封回信， 信的内容应包括下列要点：
焦虑症状： 头晕、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等
建议：
1. 考前制定好合适的复习计划；
2. 考试期间正常作息；
3. 睡前洗热水澡、喝热牛奶等有助于睡眠；
4. 其他建议(内容由考生自己拟定)。
注意：
1. 根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
2. 要准确使用语法和词汇；使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思；
3. 词数： 不少于120。
参考词汇： 头晕—dizzy(adj.)
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【参考范文】One possible version：
Dear Li Hua,
Thanks for your letter. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.
Most of us feel nervous whenever we're taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and others will lose their appetite. In fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we are all eager to get rid of them.
First of all, in my opinion, it's important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.
Besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. Therefore, during the period of exams, we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed, which might help us to have a sound sleep.
We'd better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.
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第***套
第一节：短文改错(共10小题假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有十处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个词。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改十处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl but tried to stop, but he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was bad hurt and couldn’t move. The young man didn’t know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police arrived. They send her to the nearest hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.
参考答案、、 短文改错(共10小题)I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra
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（2）
最近，你班试行在课间播放音乐，同学们对此私下议论，看法不一。请你根据下表的信息，给你班的班主任Mr Edward 写一封信，客观地介绍大家的看法。
部分同学认为
1.播放音乐能活跃气氛 1.课间时间太短，播放音乐达不到预期效果
2.能使大脑得到放松，减轻学习的疲劳 2.课间需要的是安静，而不是嘈杂的声音
3.它能给大家带来欢乐和美的享受 3.有时上课后还沉浸在课间的音乐中
One possible version:
Dear Mr Edward,
Recently we have carried out the practice to play music during the class break, and the students have had many private talks about it. Their opinions mainly fall into two groups. Most of us agree that music should be played. As we know, music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere. Besides, music brings us relaxation after hard study, which reduces the tiredness. Listening to music also makes us feel happy and nice. On the other hand, some students don't think so. In their opinion, they can't get the expected result by playing music, as the break between classes is too short. What is needed during the break is peace instead of noise produced by the music. In addition, in class some students are still lost in the music they have heard during the break.
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高考英语作文（经典好句）
（三）结尾句
1.The most effective means to solve this problem is that ______________. In that case, ______________.
解决这个问题的最有效的方法是……。如果那样的话……
2. Everything has its own two sides, no exception with AAA. For one thing, ______________. For another, ______________.
任何事情都有它的两个方面，AAA也不除外，一方面……另一方面……
3. My experience tells me that to ______________ need a thorough and persevering process, and in this process you had better abide by the principles mentioned above.
我的经验告诉我……需要一个细心而又坚持不懈的过程，并且在这个过程中你最好遵守这其中涉及的规则。
4. On the whole, it is high time that we recognized the significance of ______________.
总体上来说，这是我们认识到……的重要性的紧急时刻了。
5. As a result, we should take some effective methods to ______________.
因此，我们应该对……采取许多有效的措施
6. Judging by the figures, we can draw a conclusion that ______________.
通过分析这些数据，我们可以得到那样一个……的结论
7. In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______________. Only in this way can ______________ in the future.
一句话来说，整个社会应当对……的问题给予密切的关注。只有以这种方式才能在将来……
8. In my opinion, we should place much emphasis on the importance of ______________.
以我的观点来看，我们应当对……的重要性给予重视
9. But ______________ and ______________ have their own advantages. For example, ______________, while ______________. Comparing those two, however, I prefer to ______________.
但是……和……具有它们自己的优势。举个例子，然而。对比这两者，我更喜欢……
10. In my opinion, ______________ is just as common as ______________. If ______________, it may be very useful. Whatever ______________, the key point (of……) lies in ______________.
以我的观点来看，……就像……如果，它将非常有效。无论……重点在于……
11. Are their opinions correct? To my mind, the first idea seems ______________. As for the second idea, ______________.
他们的观点正确吗？我认为，第一个观点看起来……。对于第二个观点，……
12. As a popular saying goes, ______________. In my opinion what really counts is not ______________, but ______________. I believe that as long as ______________, we will ______________. So I am for the opinion that ______________.
一个普遍的说法是……。依我来看真正的观点不是……而是……我相信只要……我们将会……所以我的观点是……
13. In my opinion, both sides are partly right. When we ______________, we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems, and then make the right decision.
以我的观点来看，所有方面都部分正确。当我们……时，我们应当考虑问题的所有方面，并且做出正确的决定。
14. Personally, I believe that ______________. Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ______________.
一己之见，我认为……。作为结果，我相信一个光明的未来在等待着我们，因为……
15. People are coming to realize the importance of ______________. They have begun to try their best to ______________. We believe that ______________.
人们逐渐认识到……的重要性，他们开始付出最大努力来……我们相信……
16. All in all, we cannot live without ______________. But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with problems that would arise.
总之，我们不可能离开……来生活。但是同时对于即将出现的问题我们必须寻找新的方法来解决。
17. With the development of society, ______________. So it’s urgent and necessary to ______________. If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.
随着社会的发展，……所以……是急切并且必要的。如果每个人心甘情愿的为社会做出贡献，这将会好上加好。
18. It is difficult to say whether ______________ is good or not ，In general as it depends very much on the situation of ______________. However, from a personal point of view I find ______________.
很难说……是好还是坏，一般情况下，它在很大程度上取决于……的情形。然而，从个人观点来看我发现……
19. It is essential that effective actions should be taken to end for the situation.
对于这样的情形将有效的行动坚持到底是必要的。
20. It is no doubt that special attention must be paid to the problem of ______________.
毋庸置疑的，对于……的问题我们必须给予特别的关注
21. But both ______________ and ______________ have disadvantages. For example, ______________. Which to choose, ______________ or ______________? Careful consideration is necessary before you make your own choice.
但是……和……都有缺点，举例说……选择哪一个？……或什么？在做出自己的决定时细心的考虑是必要的。
22. From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that ______________.
通过上面的讨论，我们将理智的得到……的结论。
