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2024年高考第二轮复习英语版
专题升级训练二十一 短文改错
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（2024·陕西宝鸡中学高考模拟训练）
There is a park near my house in that there was a huge bird nest，the size of a football field.The nest is so tall as a fourstory building.It allowed birds of all kinds to live with much freedom than the traditional small birdcage.Within the nest，visitor can see different birds walking or flying free everywhere without being afraid of people.
There is a lake on the middle of the bird nest，where wild ducks and white swans can swim，look for food thrown down by visitors.Before leaving the bird nest，they can attend a bird show，in which some birds are trained to speak，some to play the basketball and some to ride bikes.I often go there with my friends but never get bored of their amusing performances.
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One day I told that Mr Wang，our math teacher，was ill.I was worried about him and went to see him after the school.When I enter his room，he struggled up to welcome me.I helped him lay down again.Mr Wang looked pale.I asked about his troubles.He said he was having a bad cold.After take some medicine he was getting better.He asked me that we liked the teacher who took place.When he heard everything was all right，I could see he was pleasing.Finally，I told him don't to worry about the work and have a good rest.
3
When asking what I was going to be in the future，I said my dream was to be a doctor.Li Hong，one of my friend，asked me why.Then I told her my story.I was very weak or often fell ill when I was a little child.Once I was terrible ill and got a high fever.I was in critical condition and I could die off at any point.My parents sent me to the hospital immediately，there the doctors did all they could save me.From then on I decide to be a doctor when I grow up.It is known to all，it's not easy to be a doctor.But I'll study hard and try to make my dream into reality.
4
As we all known，with the improvement of people's living standards，cars have become a popular means of transport，bring great convenience to our life.Besides，they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.
What can we solve these problems？As far as I'm concerned，riding bicycles are a good solution.For one thing，bicycles didn't need any petrol and they are energysaving.For another，bicycles are environmentally friendly because of they won't give off waste gases.Therefore，riding bicycles is a good way for we to exercise and it is of great benefit to our health.
So let's take the responsibility build up a low carbon city by riding bicycle.
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Dear Tony，
Thank you for your letter.To tell you the true，I've thought a lot about whether you should buy a laptop computer help you with your study.In my opinion，you'd better not.For one reason，it's very easy for you to develop some bad habit once you have it，such as playing computer games，see movies，which will be a waste of time.For other reason，buying a laptop computer don't mean you can study well.If you want to make a progress，you need to put your heart into your study but work hard.Whether you had a computer or not is not the most important.Do you agree to me？Looking forward to your reply!
Yours，
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Our online school is very helpful in many ways.First of all，it makes teaching and learning easy and more interesting.We can get more informations and knowledge in class.We can communicate other students home and abroad by sending and receive messages wherever we'd like to.An online school is open all day both to the students and to the teachers，or we can get the latest information through the Internet in any time.The online school is very convenient to us and other people whose can learn at home if they have a computer.They will help to improve our school management and meet the needs of modern society as well.
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Today I want to talk about make friends online.Should students make friends online？Some students think the Internet can helps them make many good friends.When chatting online，they can express their feelings and opinions more freely.Others，therefore，think that students should not make friends online.They said making friends online is waste of time，and that students should spend their time with study.Besides，there are even students who get cheat online.It is my opinion whether students should place their study，health and safe before other things.After all，they can find it so many friends in their daily life.
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My parents bought me a computer last month.It is very use.Firstly，it was good for my study.I can get a lot of useful informations from the Internet.For example，through the online English classes，I had improved my reading and listening skills.It is really great help.Secondly，chatting online are so popular that I can get in touch with my friends easily.In addition to，it makes my life colourful.I can do shopping online and buy that I like without go out.In a word，the computer has become her friend.
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After failing in the exam，my life got such dark that I didn't want to study any more.I always hid myself in his bedroom and cried quietly.In my family，I felt I am never important.I was not allowed to watch TV，use the computer or go out unless permitted.What's more，I had to stay in the study except when having meals.I almost lost my heart.
But one evening，my friend Zhang Wen came special to see me.She told me，“Nothing is impossible.You should believe in yourself.”Encouraging by what she said，I regained confidences，and made up my mind study.I hoped that I could catch up to others.
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My name is Li Hui.I lived at 26 Huangpu Road，Shanghai，China.I'm now studying in a No.21 Middle School of Shanghai.In common with much teenage boys，I like playing football in my spare time，and collect stamps is my favorite.However，I'm quite interested in computers.It's three years after I started to learn to use a computer.As an outgoing boy，I'm very glad to make new friend.If anyone feel just the same，please get touch with me by sending us an email at LiHui2011@ gmail.com.
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Dear Mike，
You asked me about the present situation of the public transportation in Chengdu at the last letter.Here I'm very glad to share anything with you.
Our city government has been trying its best to improve the public transportation since 2010.The measure include reducing bus fare，developing bike rental system and constructing four subways.
I am luck to be one of the citizens who have benefited from the bike rental system.It is total free and has covered most urban areas in Chengdu，which I can easily rent a bike and go to anywhere I like without being catch in traffic jams.More and more people are using bikes，because ride bikes not only saves energy but also helps us keep fit.
Yours，
Li Hua
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In recent years，it has been reported that some kindly people helped the old who have fallen down in the street.Fortunately they were accused of knocking down the old and had to pay for their medical treatments.It is shame that such things should have happened.
Therefore，we should still help the old who fall down.First of all，it has been a traditional Chinese virtue to respect the old or love the young.Besides，if we don't help the old today，no one will help us when we will get old.More importantly，if no one helps him，their lives will be at danger.
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Attention，please!
About 50 students from America will go to our school for a visit on October 4th.Our class asked to organize the reception.We will meet at the school gate at 8：40 a．m.wear school uniforms and give them the warm welcome.They will arrive at 9：00 a．m.，but then we will show them around the schoolyard，the lab building，the teaching building and the students dormitories.There will have a friendly basketball game over the playground at 10：00.They will leave for our school at 11：00.We should be politely to our guests and talk with them in English.
That's all.Thank you!
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I am so sorry to tell you that I won't be unable to attend the lecture on American history tomorrow afternoon.My uncle is returning back home from France，and I had promised to meet him at the airport at 3：30 tomorrow afternoon.I am very much interested in America society and history.I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recording.And if not，could I borrow the tape？It would mean great deal to me to listen to the tape and make up for which is covered in the talk.I would appreciate it though you could allow me ask for leave.
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Supposing there are much more people in the world，there must have more food to feed the people.But food is a problem in today's world.Onethird of the world's populations is starving，because there is no enough food.Ten thousand people died of hunger every day in some parts of the world.But in others parts of the world，people become ill or die because they eat too much food，and they are too fatter.Some countries have no food，but the others have too much，and they throw their food away.What can tomorrow's world feed its people？The world needs produce more food than it does now.
参考答案
1
答案：
There is a park near my house in
there
a huge bird nest，the size of a football field.The nest is
tall as a fourstory building.It
birds of all kinds to live with much
freedom than the traditional small birdcage.Within the nest， can see different birds walking or flying
everywhere without being afraid of people.
There is a lake
the middle of the bird nest，where wild ducks and white swans can swim， for food thrown down by visitors.Before leaving the bird nest，they can attend a bird show，in which some birds are trained to speak，some to play the basketball and some to ride bikes.I often go there with my friends but never get bored of their amusing performances.
2
答案：
One day I
told that Mr Wang，our math teacher，was ill.I was worried about him and went to see him after the school.When I
his room，he struggled up to welcome me.I helped him
down again.Mr Wang looked pale.I asked about his .He said he was having a bad cold.After
some medicine he was getting better.He asked me
we liked the teacher who took
place.When he heard everything was all right，I could see he was .Finally，I told him
to worry about the work and have a good rest.
3
答案：
When
what I was going to be in the future，I said my dream was to be a doctor.Li Hong，one of my ，asked me why.Then I told her my story.I was very weak
often fell ill when I was a little child.Once I was
ill and got a high fever.I was in critical condition and I could die off at any point.My parents sent me to the hospital immediately， the doctors did all they could
save me.From then on I
to be a doctor when I grow up. is known to all，it's not easy to be a doctor.But I'll study hard and try to
my dream into reality.
4
答案：
As we all ，with the improvement of people's living standards，cars have become a popular means of transport， great convenience to our life.，they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.
can we solve these problems？As far as I'm concerned，riding bicycles
a good solution.For one thing，bicycles
need any petrol and they are energysaving.For another，bicycles are environmentally friendly because of they won't give off waste gases.Therefore，riding bicycles is a good way for
to exercise and it is of great benefit to our health.
So let's take the responsibility
build up a low carbon city by riding .
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Li Hua
答案：
Dear Tony，
Thank you for your letter.To tell you the ，I've thought a lot about whether you should buy a laptop computer
help you with your study.In my opinion，you'd better not.For one reason，it's very easy for you to develop some bad
once you have it，such as playing computer games， movies，which will be a waste of time.For
reason，buying a laptop computer
mean you can study well.If you want to make a progress，you need to put your heart into your study
work hard.Whether you
a computer or not is not the most important.Do you agree
me？Looking forward to your reply!
Yours，
Li Hua
答案：
Our online school is very helpful in many ways.First of all，it makes teaching and learning
and more interesting.We can get more
and knowledge in class.We can communicate
other students home and abroad by sending and
messages
we'd like to.
online school is open all day both to the students and to the teachers， we can get the latest information through the Internet
any time.The online school is very convenient to us and other people
can learn at home if they have a computer. will help to improve our school management and meet the needs of modern society as well.
7
答案：
Today I want to talk about
friends online.Should students make friends online？Some students think the Internet can
them make many good friends.When chatting online，they can express their feelings and opinions more freely.Others，，think that students should not make friends online.They
making friends online is
waste of time，and that students should spend their time
study.Besides，there are even students who get
online.It is my opinion
students should place their study，health and
before other things.After all，they can find it so many friends in their daily life.
答案：
My parents bought me a computer last month.It is very .Firstly，it
good for my study.I can get a lot of useful
from the Internet.For example，through the online English classes，I
improved my reading and listening skills.It is really
great help.Secondly，chatting online
so popular that I can get in touch with my friends easily.In addition to ，it makes my life colourful.I can do shopping online and buy
I like without
out.In a word，the computer has become
friend.
答案：
After failing in the exam，my life got
dark that I didn't want to study any more.I always hid myself in
bedroom and cried quietly.In my family，I felt I
never important.I was not allowed to watch TV，use the computer or go out unless permitted.What's ，I had to stay in the study except when having meals.I almost lost my heart.
But one evening，my friend Zhang Wen came
to see me.She told me，“Nothing is impossible.You should believe in yourself.” by what she said，I regained ，and made up my mind
study.I hoped that I could catch up
others.
10
答案：
My name is Li Hui.I
at 26 Huangpu Road，Shanghai，China.I'm now studying in a No.21 Middle School of Shanghai.In common with
teenage boys，I like playing football in my spare time，and
stamps is my favorite.，I'm quite interested in computers.It's three years
I started to learn to use a computer.As an outgoing boy，I'm very glad to make new .If anyone
just the same，please get
touch with me by sending
an email at LiHui2011@gmail.com.
答案：
Dear Mike，
You asked me about the present situation of the public transportation in Chengdu
the last letter.Here I'm very glad to share
with you.
Our city government has been trying its best to improve the public transportation since 2010.The
