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  第二步:调查结果

  2. 方式一:82%的考生要求先考试,在知道成绩后再填报志愿。 Most students, about 82%, insist that the choice should be based on their score after the College Entrance Exams.

  3. 方式二:12%的考生选择考试后,在成绩揭晓前,估分填报志愿。 12% of the students, however, believe that the choice should be made right after the exams.

  4. 方式三:6%的考生喜欢在考试前就填报好志愿。 Interestingly, 6% of the students hold the idea that the choice should be made before the exams.

  第三步:我的观点

  5. 我选择成绩揭晓后再填报志愿,这样可以做出正确的、恰当的选择。 Personally, I would rather choose my favorite major and university after knowing the exact test score so that I can make a proper choice.

  6. 另外两种填报方式带有很大的盲目性。 The other two options would seem to blindfold us.

  7. 如果考前就填好了志愿,可能会使学生考试时产生焦虑情绪,对考场的发挥带来负面的影响。 In addition, if the big choice were made before the exams, it might bring anxiety during the exams, which naturally would have a negative effect on our performance.

  感谢您的关注 Thank you for your attention ! 第29讲

  表格作文

  (2024·江苏卷)生活中冲突时有发生。假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执,导致关系紧张。请你结合此事,并根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,向学校英文报“Happy Teens”专栏投稿。 注意: 1. 对所有要点逐一陈述,适当发挥, 不要简单翻译。 2. 词数150左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。 3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。 思路点拨:本篇书面表达只给出写作框架,并未给出所有的写作细节,题目比较贴近学生的话题。主要是两个学生闹矛盾,让他们提出观点和解决方法。这样的题型也需要同学平时多留心身边发生的事,多思考生活。这给考生留有自由发挥的空间。因此考生要合理展开行文,简要描述引发冲突的经过、分析发生冲突的原因并谈谈避免冲突的做法,同时要注意文章的逻辑性和段落层次性,注意不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。

  【参考答案】

  Conflicts_with_others_are_common_in_everyday_life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.

  To be honest, it was Su's fault but Li was also to blame — they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing. As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game. 【参考答案】

  To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others' place.

  Don't be self­centered and try to be considerate. We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely. 【作文点评】

  本文包含了所有表格中出现的要点,语言严谨,时态使用正确。本文最好的两点是恰当地使用连接过渡词,以及复杂的句式,这样可以使行文更加流畅。

  图表作文是近几年高考常选的命题方式之一。在高考中常以两种形式对学生进行考查,一种是文字表格式,另一种是柱形或饼形图表式。文字表格式在近几年全国各省每年都考查过,而柱形或饼形图表式作文则在2006年的湖北卷及2004年的北京卷出现过。湖南省在2008年的高考中,是另一种形式的图表作文:文字表格+人物图像。这些数据说明,高考命题者对图表作文还是比较青睐的。

  ●文字表格式

  文字表格式作文的体裁相对稳定,以说明文、议论文为主,辅之以记叙文。题材丰富多样,有书信、发言稿、介绍等,通常情况下,试题明确规定了所使用的写作格式。因此,考生只需根据表格的提示内容,确定所要表达的写作要点,运用自己所掌握的句型和词汇知识,做到:要点齐全、语句通顺、条理清楚、表达明确、思路灵活、书写工整。

  具体操作时注意以下两个方面:

  一是布好局、谋好篇。动笔前,一定要根据表格的提示内容,先确定表达文章所需的体裁,然后根据所给题材确定文章的整体结构。

  二是确定写作要点。在心中布局谋篇后,根据表格内容确定写作要点,尤其是自由发挥或谈感想的要点。全文最好以要点或短语形式列一个写作提纲,以便不遗漏要点。

  因此,同学们平时训练写作时,在认真审题,分清体裁和题材后,应逐个地、完整地把表格中的要点及需要自由发挥的要点找出来,然后根据不同体裁把要写作的内容清楚地表达出来。对于记叙文,根据表格提示,注意故事发生的时间、地点、人物、事件、起因和结果,写作时常使用一般过去时态和第一人称。对于说明文,把需要解说的事物性质、对象、目的、用途等解释清楚,写作时常使用一般现在时。对于议论文,根据表格所给提示把要点(论点和论据)以及自由发挥的观点和论据阐释清楚,写作时常用一般现在时。对于应用文,首先要注意它的写作格式,如2010年高考阅卷对格式是这样给分:发言稿的格式正确,给1分。

  当然,所有的写作都要做到“结构合理,内容连贯,行文流畅,给6分(2010年湖南高考阅卷评分要求)”。

  例:长沙最近计划修建地铁,这件事引发了人们的广泛争论。请根据所给信息写一篇英文报道,客观陈述人们的不同看法,并表明自己的观点。 赞成观点 反对观点 1. 解决交通拥堵问题,方便市民生活。 2. 提供一种新的交通方式,促进环境保护。 1. 建设时间长,影响日常生活。 2. 投入资金过大,成本回收过慢。 你的观点…… 注意: 1. 不要逐句翻译,可适当增加内容使行文连贯; 2. 词数:不少于120。 思路点拨:本文为利弊分析型作文。基本时态应为一般现在时态。可按三段论的方式来陈述题目所规定的三个要点:赞成观点;反对观点;自己的观点。前面两个部分题目给出了具体的内容,写作时要注意句式的正确性和多样性。同时要注意恰当地运用连接词,使文章显得流畅自然。第三部分为开放性作文,你需要表明你自己的观点,同时说明你的理由。

  【参考答案】

  Recently, people are having an argument on whether the subway should be built in Changsha or not. Opinions vary from person to person.

  Some people think it necessary to build the subway. For one thing, building the subway can help solve traffic problems and people will enjoy a more convenient life. For another, it provides a new means of transportation, which is environmentally friendly. 【参考答案】

  One coin has two sides. On the other hand, others hold the opposite opinion. From their point of view, the long process of construction is bound to influence people's daily life. What's more, too much money will be spent building it, and it will take a long time to get the money back.

  Weighing the pros and cons, I support the idea that the subway should be built because not only will the environment be protected but also more space will be saved.

  一、利弊型

  Recently, our class had a heated discussion on whether 作文主题. Opinions vary from person to person/Opinions are divided among students.

  Some people think it necessary to 正方观点. For one thing, 理由一. For another, 理由二.

  On the other hand, others hold the opposite opinion. From their point of view, 反方理由一. What's more, 反方理由二.

  In my opinion, I support/oppose that idea that作文主题. 你的理由.

  二、观点对比型

  Recently, a survey has been carried out in our school on whether 作文主题.

  As can be seen from the result of the survey, opinions are divided. About 持有第一种观点的人数. The reasons are as follows. First, 第一种理由. Besides, 第二种理由.

  On the contrary, others say 他们的观点. They think 第一种理由. What's more, 第二种理由.

  As far as I'm concerned, we should自己的观点. Only in this way美好前景预测.

  ●柱形或饼形图表式

  柱形或饼形图表式作文的体裁多为议论文、说明文和应用文,内容大多涉及前后变化对比、正反观点对比或产品介绍等。要求考生通过数据、文字内容分析,系统准确地表达出突变含义,并得出令人信服的结论。必须做到行文切题,紧扣中心思想,不漏要点,并且意思连贯,文理通顺,语言准确、得当。

  柱形或饼形图表式作文写作形式和要求与文字表格式有所区别。写图表作文时,要注意遵循以下步骤:

  (1)认真分析图表的含义,弄清图表中所含的信息及不同信息间的关系;柱形图用来表示各种事物的变化情况及相互关系,要求考生通过宽度相等的柱形的高度或长度差别来判断事物的动态发展趋势,因此考生应密切关注坐标线上的刻度单位及图表旁边的提示说明与文字。饼形图表示各事物在总体中所占的比例及相互关系,旨在要求考生准确理解并阐述一个被分割成大小不等切片的饼形图所传达的信息。考生应清楚掌握部分与整体,部分与部分之间的相互关系,这种关系通常是以百分比的数字形式给出的。

  (2)确定文章的主题思想,构思出文章的基本框架,筛选出能说明图表主题思想的典型数据;

  (3)编列文章的提纲;

  (4)根据文章的提纲,将各段的提纲内容扩展成段落,然后将各个段落组成文章,注意段与段之间的衔接与过渡。

  实际写作时,常采用三段式的谋篇方式。

  第一段:概述图表反映的主题思想;

  第二段:分析产生的原因;

  第三段:展望未来或提出办法或建议。 例:下面是某高中学校对150名高三学生睡眠时间不足及原因所作的调查,结果如下。请根据图1提供的信息描述高三学生的睡眠情况,并针对图2中任何一个数据所反映的情况写出你的看法。 参考词汇:图表chart n. 思路点拨:本文属图表类作文,要仔细读图和图前的文字说明。本文要求考生说明学生睡眠情况的调查结果。基本时态应用一般现在时态。以第三人称的口气来表达内容。从写作步骤来看,可先描述学生睡眠时间不足的具体数据,然后针对图2中任何一个数据所反映的情况写出你的一个看法。在介绍数据变化时应特别注意表达的多样性。 【参考答案】

  Chart 1 shows the sleeping time that senior 3 students can have every day. Sixty­two percent of the students sleep just less than seven hours each day, while thirty­seven of them can sleep seven to eight hours. However, only one percent can sleep over eight hours.

  From Chart 2, we learn the reason why most senior 3 students don't have enough sleep. One of the reasons is that thirty­five students stay up late studying hard. I think it's not wise to do so. We should sleep well at night and wake up feeling more refreshed. So we can make the best of daytime and study better in an effective way.

  Recently, a survey has been done to find out 所要表达的主题. As is shown in the pie chart,表中的内容1, 表中的内容2. 表中的内容3 and表中的内容4.

  In conclusion, the survey shows that总体规律、趋势或呈现的问题. Many factors contribute to the problem. One is that原因之一. Another is that原因之二.

  In my opinion,自己的观点, 如何解决问题. 1

  As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/ percentageinthe table (graph/pie chart), 作文题目的议题 has been on rise (goes up/increases/drops/decreases). 具体变化数据. Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that 得出结论.

  There are 至少两个 reasons why this happened. On the one hand, 原因之一 . On the otherhand, 原因之二. In addition, 原因之三 is also responsible for it.

  It is high time that we 发出倡议. We should 解决问题的方法或对策.

  2 【基础练习】

  央视《时空调查》栏目针对目前我国现行的高考填报志愿的3种形式作了一个网上调查,调查的结果如下。你作为即将参加2024年高考的一名考生,请你简要的描述调查的结果,谈一谈你对此事的看法并说明你的理由。 注意: 1.词数不少于120; 2.可以适当添加内容; 3.文章的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。 According to a survey carried out by Horizon Research, Chinese senior high school students have different opinions on when to choose their majors or universities. _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________

  根据图表作文的写作技巧,我们先分步进行翻译写作。

  第一步:提出主题(考生填报志愿的3种方式)

  1. 央视《时空调查》栏目针对目前我国现行的高考填报志愿的3种形式作了一个网上调查。 According to a survey carried out by Horizon Research, Chinese senior high school students have different opinions on when to choose their majors or universities.

  第二步:调查结果

  2. 方式一:82%的考生要求先考试,在知道成绩后再填报志愿。 Most students, about 82%, insist that the choice should be based on their score after the College Entrance Exams.

  3. 方式二:12%的考生选择考试后,在成绩揭晓前,估分填报志愿。 12% of the students, however, believe that the choice should be made right after the exams.

  4. 方式三:6%的考生喜欢在考试前就填报好志愿。 Interestingly, 6% of the students hold the idea that the choice should be made before the exams.

  第三步:我的观点

  5. 我选择成绩揭晓后再填报志愿,这样可以做出正确的、恰当的选择。 Personally, I would rather choose my favorite major and university after knowing the exact test score so that I can make a proper choice.

  6. 另外两种填报方式带有很大的盲目性。 The other two options would seem to blindfold us.

  7. 如果考前就填好了志愿,可能会使学生考试时产生焦虑情绪,对考场的发挥带来负面的影响。 In addition, if the big choice were made before the exams, it might bring anxiety during the exams, which naturally would have a negative effect on our performance.

  感谢您的关注 Thank you for your attention ! 第29讲

  表格作文

  (2024·江苏卷)生活中冲突时有发生。假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执,导致关系紧张。请你结合此事,并根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,向学校英文报“Happy Teens”专栏投稿。 注意: 1. 对所有要点逐一陈述,适当发挥, 不要简单翻译。 2. 词数150左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。 3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。 思路点拨:本篇书面表达只给出写作框架,并未给出所有的写作细节,题目比较贴近学生的话题。主要是两个学生闹矛盾,让他们提出观点和解决方法。这样的题型也需要同学平时多留心身边发生的事,多思考生活。这给考生留有自由发挥的空间。因此考生要合理展开行文,简要描述引发冲突的经过、分析发生冲突的原因并谈谈避免冲突的做法,同时要注意文章的逻辑性和段落层次性,注意不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。

  【参考答案】

  Conflicts_with_others_are_common_in_everyday_life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.

  To be honest, it was Su's fault but Li was also to blame — they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing. As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game. 【参考答案】

  To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others' place.

  Don't be self­centered and try to be considerate. We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely. 【作文点评】

  本文包含了所有表格中出现的要点,语言严谨,时态使用正确。本文最好的两点是恰当地使用连接过渡词,以及复杂的句式,这样可以使行文更加流畅。

  图表作文是近几年高考常选的命题方式之一。在高考中常以两种形式对学生进行考查,一种是文字表格式,另一种是柱形或饼形图表式。文字表格式在近几年全国各省每年都考查过,而柱形或饼形图表式作文则在2006年的湖北卷及2004年的北京卷出现过。湖南省在2008年的高考中,是另一种形式的图表作文:文字表格+人物图像。这些数据说明,高考命题者对图表作文还是比较青睐的。

  ●文字表格式

  文字表格式作文的体裁相对稳定,以说明文、议论文为主,辅之以记叙文。题材丰富多样,有书信、发言稿、介绍等,通常情况下,试题明确规定了所使用的写作格式。因此,考生只需根据表格的提示内容,确定所要表达的写作要点,运用自己所掌握的句型和词汇知识,做到:要点齐全、语句通顺、条理清楚、表达明确、思路灵活、书写工整。

  具体操作时注意以下两个方面:

  一是布好局、谋好篇。动笔前,一定要根据表格的提示内容,先确定表达文章所需的体裁,然后根据所给题材确定文章的整体结构。

  二是确定写作要点。在心中布局谋篇后,根据表格内容确定写作要点,尤其是自由发挥或谈感想的要点。全文最好以要点或短语形式列一个写作提纲,以便不遗漏要点。

  因此,同学们平时训练写作时,在认真审题,分清体裁和题材后,应逐个地、完整地把表格中的要点及需要自由发挥的要点找出来,然后根据不同体裁把要写作的内容清楚地表达出来。对于记叙文,根据表格提示,注意故事发生的时间、地点、人物、事件、起因和结果,写作时常使用一般过去时态和第一人称。对于说明文,把需要解说的事物性质、对象、目的、用途等解释清楚,写作时常使用一般现在时。对于议论文,根据表格所给提示把要点(论点和论据)以及自由发挥的观点和论据阐释清楚,写作时常用一般现在时。对于应用文,首先要注意它的写作格式,如2010年高考阅卷对格式是这样给分:发言稿的格式正确,给1分。

  当然,所有的写作都要做到“结构合理,内容连贯,行文流畅,给6分(2010年湖南高考阅卷评分要求)”。

  例:长沙最近计划修建地铁,这件事引发了人们的广泛争论。请根据所给信息写一篇英文报道,客观陈述人们的不同看法,并表明自己的观点。 赞成观点 反对观点 1. 解决交通拥堵问题,方便市民生活。 2. 提供一种新的交通方式,促进环境保护。 1. 建设时间长,影响日常生活。 2. 投入资金过大,成本回收过慢。 你的观点…… 注意: 1. 不要逐句翻译,可适当增加内容使行文连贯; 2. 词数:不少于120。 思路点拨:本文为利弊分析型作文。基本时态应为一般现在时态。可按三段论的方式来陈述题目所规定的三个要点:赞成观点;反对观点;自己的观点。前面两个部分题目给出了具体的内容,写作时要注意句式的正确性和多样性。同时要注意恰当地运用连接词,使文章显得流畅自然。第三部分为开放性作文,你需要表明你自己的观点,同时说明你的理由。

  【参考答案】

  Recently, people are having an argument on whether the subway should be built in Changsha or not. Opinions vary from person to person.

  Some people think it necessary to build the subway. For one thing, building the subway can help solve traffic problems and people will enjoy a more convenient life. For another, it provides a new means of transportation, which is environmentally friendly. 【参考答案】

  One coin has two sides. On the other hand, others hold the opposite opinion. From their point of view, the long process of construction is bound to influence people's daily life. What's more, too much money will be spent building it, and it will take a long time to get the money back.

  Weighing the pros and cons, I support the idea that the subway should be built because not only will the environment be protected but also more space will be saved.

  一、利弊型

  Recently, our class had a heated discussion on whether 作文主题. Opinions vary from person to person/Opinions are divided among students.

  Some people think it necessary to 正方观点. For one thing, 理由一. For another, 理由二.

  On the other hand, others hold the opposite opinion. From their point of view, 反方理由一. What's more, 反方理由二.

  In my opinion, I support/oppose that idea that作文主题. 你的理由.

  二、观点对比型

  Recently, a survey has been carried out in our school on whether 作文主题.

  As can be seen from the result of the survey, opinions are divided. About 持有第一种观点的人数. The reasons are as follows. First, 第一种理由. Besides, 第二种理由.

  On the contrary, others say 他们的观点. They think 第一种理由. What's more, 第二种理由.

  As far as I'm concerned, we should自己的观点. Only in this way美好前景预测.

  ●柱形或饼形图表式

  柱形或饼形图表式作文的体裁多为议论文、说明文和应用文,内容大多涉及前后变化对比、正反观点对比或产品介绍等。要求考生通过数据、文字内容分析,系统准确地表达出突变含义,并得出令人信服的结论。必须做到行文切题,紧扣中心思想,不漏要点,并且意思连贯,文理通顺,语言准确、得当。

  柱形或饼形图表式作文写作形式和要求与文字表格式有所区别。写图表作文时,要注意遵循以下步骤:

  (1)认真分析图表的含义,弄清图表中所含的信息及不同信息间的关系;柱形图用来表示各种事物的变化情况及相互关系,要求考生通过宽度相等的柱形的高度或长度差别来判断事物的动态发展趋势,因此考生应密切关注坐标线上的刻度单位及图表旁边的提示说明与文字。饼形图表示各事物在总体中所占的比例及相互关系,旨在要求考生准确理解并阐述一个被分割成大小不等切片的饼形图所传达的信息。考生应清楚掌握部分与整体,部分与部分之间的相互关系,这种关系通常是以百分比的数字形式给出的。

  (2)确定文章的主题思想,构思出文章的基本框架,筛选出能说明图表主题思想的典型数据;

  (3)编列文章的提纲;

  (4)根据文章的提纲,将各段的提纲内容扩展成段落,然后将各个段落组成文章,注意段与段之间的衔接与过渡。

  实际写作时,常采用三段式的谋篇方式。

  第一段:概述图表反映的主题思想;

  第二段:分析产生的原因;

  第三段:展望未来或提出办法或建议。 例:下面是某高中学校对150名高三学生睡眠时间不足及原因所作的调查,结果如下。请根据图1提供的信息描述高三学生的睡眠情况,并针对图2中任何一个数据所反映的情况写出你的看法。 参考词汇:图表chart n. 思路点拨:本文属图表类作文,要仔细读图和图前的文字说明。本文要求考生说明学生睡眠情况的调查结果。基本时态应用一般现在时态。以第三人称的口气来表达内容。从写作步骤来看,可先描述学生睡眠时间不足的具体数据,然后针对图2中任何一个数据所反映的情况写出你的一个看法。在介绍数据变化时应特别注意表达的多样性。 【参考答案】

  Chart 1 shows the sleeping time that senior 3 students can have every day. Sixty­two percent of the students sleep just less than seven hours each day, while thirty­seven of them can sleep seven to eight hours. However, only one percent can sleep over eight hours.

  From Chart 2, we learn the reason why most senior 3 students don't have enough sleep. One of the reasons is that thirty­five students stay up late studying hard. I think it's not wise to do so. We should sleep well at night and wake up feeling more refreshed. So we can make the best of daytime and study better in an effective way.

  Recently, a survey has been done to find out 所要表达的主题. As is shown in the pie chart,表中的内容1, 表中的内容2. 表中的内容3 and表中的内容4.

  In conclusion, the survey shows that总体规律、趋势或呈现的问题. Many factors contribute to the problem. One is that原因之一. Another is that原因之二.

  In my opinion,自己的观点, 如何解决问题. 1

  As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/ percentageinthe table (graph/pie chart), 作文题目的议题 has been on rise (goes up/increases/drops/decreases). 具体变化数据. Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that 得出结论.

  There are 至少两个 reasons why this happened. On the one hand, 原因之一 . On the otherhand, 原因之二. In addition, 原因之三 is also responsible for it.

  It is high time that we 发出倡议. We should 解决问题的方法或对策.

  2 【基础练习】

  央视《时空调查》栏目针对目前我国现行的高考填报志愿的3种形式作了一个网上调查,调查的结果如下。你作为即将参加2024年高考的一名考生,请你简要的描述调查的结果,谈一谈你对此事的看法并说明你的理由。 注意: 1.词数不少于120; 2.可以适当添加内容; 3.文章的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。 According to a survey carried out by Horizon Research, Chinese senior high school students have different opinions on when to choose their majors or universities. _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________

  根据图表作文的写作技巧,我们先分步进行翻译写作。

  第一步:提出主题(考生填报志愿的3种方式)

  1. 央视《时空调查》栏目针对目前我国现行的高考填报志愿的3种形式作了一个网上调查。 According to a survey carried out by Horizon Research, Chinese senior high school students have different opinions on when to choose their majors or universities.

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