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2024年高考英语考前冲刺书面表达命题预测
高考英语写作,即根据提示进行书面表达,有效的组织自己的思想,自己的逻辑,正确地运用语文载体,连贯地传递信息,表达意思,有效运用所学语言知识。
高考英语书面表达是英语考试的重头戏之一,而且非常适合考前集中突破。高考英语作文题目的命题历来是“情理之中,意料之外”。“情理之中”即高考英语写作皆是“学生话题、现实生活、热点焦点话题”;“意料之外”则指高考英语作文题目经常与考生直接关心的社会热点话题无直接联系,但仔细琢磨,又会发现一些联系,就是说“热点归热点,关键找角度”。
注意:
1)要把原文的内容表达的清楚,顺畅
2) 字数一定要达到要求
3)符合出题者的要求
4)复合句、高级词汇的使用。
要求考生必须把以下范文背诵并默写过,高考时则可根据实际进行套用,大脑提取信息,信手拈来高分!
预测一:
面对高考,父母孩子们都有着沉重的压力。请仔细观察下面漫画,写一篇短文。要求:
1.描述漫画内容,如情景、人物、动作等等;
2.着重描述漫画所表达的现象以及你的看法。
注意:
1. 可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示,作必要的发挥想象。
2.词数150左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。内容可适当发挥,注意行文连贯。
预测二:
(一)
人情冷暖,何至于此?10月13日下午5时30分许,一出惨剧 (tragedy) 发生在广东佛山:年仅两岁的女童小悦悦先后三次被车碾过。而让人难以理解的是,七分钟内从女童身边经过的十八个路人,竟然对此不闻不问。最后,一位捡垃圾的阿姨把小悦悦抱到路边并找到她的妈妈。经医院抢救无效,最终离世。根据这则资讯,用英语写一篇100词左右的短文,对司机和路人的冷漠(indifference)加以简要的评论。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
【参考范文】
Recently, a tragedy happened in Foshan, Guangdong Province. A two-year-old girl was run over by two buses for three times and the two drivers left directly. What’s worse, while the girl was lying in the street bleeding and crying in pain, 18 people passed by but nobody stopped to do anything to save the girl. At the news, I think both the drivers and those passers by are to blame for their selfishness and indifference, whatever reasons they can give. In life, every one can meet trouble and need help, in which case all the other people should spare no efforts. So, here, I just call on the whole society to love and help each other. If we cannot defeat indifference, perhaps, one day, we will get ourselves killed by it.
(二)
假设你叫李明,下面是你的一位外国笔友Kristie给你写的电子邮件,询问有关小悦悦事件的情况。
Dear Li Ming,
I learned from a news flash that a two-year-old girl was ignored by more than a dozen passers-by after being run over twice in a south China town.I’m very shocked.I used to think the Chinese were hardworking and kindhearted, and they really were when I was on a visit in China two years ago.So I doubt whether it was true news.Can you tell me what you learned about this incident?
Sincerely yours,Kristie
请你给她回一封邮件,要点如下:
1.社会陷入自责和反思;
2.某些路人的冷漠或许另有原因,可最终还是有一名拾荒阿姨挺身而出;
3.单个事件不能代表中国,助人为乐一直是中国的传统美德。
注意:
1.不能照抄原信件语句;
2.可自由发挥添加细节;
3.词数100左右;
4.回信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:伦理道德ethical and moral (adj.);
美德virtue (n.)
【参考范文】
Dear Kristie,
I was in very low spirits when hearing this shocking news, and so was the whole nation.All the people have been undertaking a thoughtful review of the ethical and moral challenges we are faced with.While we blame those hardhearted passers-by, there might be deep reasons behind the scenes.For various reasons there is a growing tendency for people to keep away from being involved in such accidents.However, on no account shall we tolerate this heartless behavior.Luckily in the story you mentioned, an old lady, who earned her life by collecting rubbish, came to the little girl’s aid and helped rush her to hospital.So we have every reason to believe that the Chinese traditional virtues of being ready to help others will remain forever.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
预测三:
假设你叫李华,是校报通讯员。上周三你班召开了一次班会,会上重点讨论“老人摔倒要不要扶起”这一话题,原因是近几年发生过多起因扶起摔倒老人而引火烧身的官司。你班同学对此进行了激烈辩论,请你结合辩论情况,用英语为校报写一篇报道,并发表自己的看法。
注意:
1.词数100左右。
2.可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
3.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
4.参考词汇
官司:lawsuit
【参考范文】
A class meeting was held in our class last Wednesday. At the meeting we classmates had a heated debate on “whether we should help the old people up when they fall over.”
Some classmates think we have responsibility to help them, because we Chinese have fine traditions to help people in trouble. While others have quite different opinions. They think we should leave a distance off and help to call 120, because in recent years many lawsuits have happened due to helping the old people. The helpers had to pay the injured a lot of money.
In my opinion, when we help the old people, we should depend on specific situation. When the old person is in great danger and badly needs help, we should give an immediate first aid and help to send him or her to the nearest hospital. When the old person is slightly injured, we’d better help to call the police.
预测四:
近年来,由食品卫生安全引发的问题在校园内外时有发生。你校上周就发生了一次食物中毒事件,两名学生在校外吃了一种油炸食品而引起胃痛。请你以李华的名义用英文给学校英语报社编辑写一封信,谈谈你对这一现象的看法。词数:100左右。内容必须包括:
1.有些商家只顾赚钱,无视人们的健康和安全;
2.学生应尽量在校园内吃饭,不要到校外乱吃;
3.为了防止类似事件发生, 提出你的建议。
【参考范文】
Dear editor,
Last week, two students of our school suffered from stomachache because they ate some poisonous fried food outside campus. Nowadays in our country, some business people care little about people’s health and safety as long as they can make money. Some even sell polluted or poisonous food to consumers and this often leads to serious health problems. In order to prevent such tragedy happening again, we students should try to avoid buying food from the stores or stalls out of the school, and have meals in school dining rooms. Only in this way can we protect ourselves. Besides, the local government and the school should take practical measures to ensure students’ health and life security. I’m expecting your advice and ideas.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
预测五:
假如你叫李华,是一位高中生。随着科技的发展,iPod已成为中学生的新宠。用iPod既可听音乐、阅读纯文本电子书,又可玩电子游戏。请你用英语给某英语报社写一封信,谈谈中学生使用iPod的情况。信的内容须包括以下几点:
1.使用iPod对学习的好处。
2.对课堂纪律和学习可能产生的负面影响。
3.提出自己的建议并说明理由。
注意:1.开头、结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;2.词数100左右。
【参考范文】
Dear Editor,
I’m a senior high school student named Li Hua.Now many students have iPods and think it’s a fashion to use them.Using an iPod,we can listen to music,download a lot of learning materials and read them on the screen.Some students,however,bring their iPods to classroom and listen to music with earphones,which makes the teacher and other students greatly annoyed.What’s worse,some of them even waste precious time in class playing video games.In my opinion,as a student,we should make good use of iPod to help achieve academic success.Classroom is a place for students to study,and therefore,the school should make a rule to guide the students to use iPods in a proper way.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
预测六:
近年微博(microblog)在中国越来越流行,2011年也被有关媒体称为“微博元年”。假设你是校报记者,请根据下列提示为校报写一篇介绍微博的英语短文。
1.非常方便,人们可以随时利用微博来表达心声,交流想法;
2.给人们提供了一种释放压力的方式;
3.与朋友分享心情,增进他们之间的了解;
4.也有潜在的危险,有可能泄露个人隐私或其他重要信息;
5.综上所述,使用微博要谨慎。
词数:100左右(已给部分不计入总词数)
【参考范文】
Microblog has become part of our life. It is very convenient for people to express their feelings instantly at any time. Besides, it provides a chance for people to release their inner stress. By showing their heartfelt emotions on the microblog, their friends may also know about their condition and can offer timely comfort. However, microblog can also be potentially dangerous as it may give away people’s privacy and other significant information. All in all, microblog provides us with some concerns as well as comfort and large quantities of information, so we should be careful while using it.
预测七:
法国哲学家卢梭说过:“No Thanksgiving would be no virtue.”(没有感恩就没有真正的美德。)如今社会上一些人缺乏感恩之心,少数人甚至在父母年老体弱时都不愿意赡养。
请你结合自己的实际,谈几点父母值得你感恩的地方,以及将来你会做些什么来报答父母的养育之恩。
注意:1.短文的开头已给出,但不计入总词数。
2.100词左右。(感恩:thanksgiving)
【参考范文】
Not only do our parents give us life, but they also give us endless love and support, always sharing our happiness and sorrow. I’m very grateful to my parents. They give me so much love and spare no efforts to support me. I still remember once I was seriously ill, they were so worried and almost kept me company the whole night. Now I’m in Senior 3.Luckily for me, my parents can understand my stressful condition and often communicate with me with encouraging words. Furthermore, they give me enough personal space, which I appreciate so much. What I should do now is to study hard. When I grow up, I will try my best to make my parents live a happy life.
预测八:
中国“虎妈”蔡美儿以其给两个女儿列出绝对不允许做的“十不准”在全球一炮走红。由此而引发的有关如何教育子女的争论愈演愈烈。请就此给China Daily投稿,阐明家长们的不同观点,并发表自己的见解。
一些家长的观点
子女必须沿着父母为其选择的道路努力……
必要时采用高压手段……
另一些家长的观点 孩子应该自由发展……赏识教育,好孩子是夸出来的……
你的观点
……(至少两点)
注意:
1.对所给要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
2.词数100左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
【参考范文】
Amy Chua, a professor at Yale Law School, who listed ten “Don’ts” to her two daughters became famous overnight.She insists that parents should be very strict with their children. It has caused a heated online debate.Some parents insist that children should make every effort to live up to their parents’ expectations.They believe it is necessary to be strict with their children.They say parents who set high standards and push their kids to study and make achievements can ensure their children’s success in the future competition. Others, on the contrary, hold the opinion that children should have the right to make their own decisions and develop in their own way.Additionally, praise the children when they do well and encourage them when they are faced with challenges, and they will be great. In my opinion, those who are raised with the strict Chinese parenting style don’t have the ability to think and act independently.They lack imagination, creativity and social skills.Parents should not put so much pressure on the children.Just give them suggestions and show respect to their own choices so that they will learn to be independent.预测九:
校车安全条例(草案征求意见稿)》【参考范文】
Legal Affairs Office of the State Council of China publicized the exposure draft of School Bus Safety Regulations on Dec. 11th, 2011 to collect public opinions. During the past year, there have been several severe school bus accidents which claimed many young lives. These tragedies came as a shock to everyone, and they have aroused great concern among people from all walks of life. The publication of the draft regulations indicates that our government has realized how serious the situation is and that it is taking effective measures to ensure the safety of the school bus.
In my opinion, the draft regulations reflect a deep concern from our government as well as from the public about students’ lives. When put into effect, the regulations will surely help reduce the number of accidents and benefit schools and families as well. Also, they will be of vital importance in stabilizing the society.
(二)
近年来中小学及幼儿园校车的交通事故时有发生,在社会上造成了非常不好的影响。重庆市政府决定统一配置中小学校、幼儿园校车,校车设置统一的识别颜色、图案。
假定你是李华,请就此写一封邮件给在美国的笔友Jack,
介绍这一情况。要点如下:
1.背景介绍;
2.描述校车;
3.校车好处;
4.询问美国校车管理经验。
字数:100左右。
【参考范文】
Dear Jack,
How is everything? In the past few years in China, terrible accidents have happened to school buses, causing much attention as well as worries. Recently our government decided to provide buses for schools and kindergartens. The new school buses have the same color and mark. The new school bus has a big nose, which is quite different from an ordinary bus. It has better safety equipment. It will be less crowded and run on time. The bus driver will be more experienced. The police will have more stricter rules. Safety will be certainly guaranteed. By the way how does a school bus run in the United States? Could you tell me something about American school buses?
Best wishes!
Yours ever,
Li Hua
预测十:
公安部发布了《关于处罚醉酒驾驶的征求意见稿》,提出搭乘醉酒司机车的乘客也应该受到惩罚。此事引起了社会的广泛关注与热议。请根据下表提供的信息,以“Should passengers be responsible for drunk drivers?”为题写一篇100词左右的英语短文。(开头已给出)
正方:1.乘客的搭乘等于纵容酒后驾驶
2.对司机和自己的生命都不负责对乘客不公平








