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继续上周分享的主题，因为有不少优秀习作值得我们细细品味。很多同学想，写好考试作文很简单呀，只要35-45个单词，我干嘛要学写那么长的作文呢？作为一名教师，真的不想将自己的课堂天天围着考试转。一节英语课，不仅仅是教必须教的内容，希望有更多的时间让学生说他们想说的，学会写自己想表达的，循序渐进，让听说读写融合到贴近现实生活的场景。老师就像是一个武林高手，化有形为无形，化复杂为简单——准备的一字一句都需要让课堂氛围变得轻松自然，像是日常谈话一般；对各种问题的解释也需要简单易懂。学语言不能丧失语言的弹性和生命力，若是课堂上花一些时间指导学生们真正“使用”英语，他们将会有越来越多的学习主动性，学到自己真正想学的东西。
My Dream Job—— Director
锦绣小学五3班 韩哲
Someone wants to be a teacher, someone wants to be a doctor, someone wants to be a dancer… And I want to be a director.
A director can teach actors, decorate the light and make a movie. Sometimes it is very difficult to make the movie, but you should try your best and make efforts.
My favourite kind of movies is comedy. It is very interesting and meaningful, such as a movie which is about Kulu masters. I know a lot about “never give up”.
And I want to be a director like Li An. As you know, I can take photos by camera, I can also take a photo in the studios, or in the location. My photos are very beautiful. When I travel around the world, I always keep the memories with my camera. I also can write nice articles, such as short stories or short dramas. I always enjoy it. I write a lot of poems, my Chinese teacher Li likes them.
From my perspective, to become an outstanding director, I have to study hard, and read a lot of books. The most important thing is that I am supposed to watch more movies. I know a lot about movies, such as montage parallele, shooting script, telephoto lens… Only on this way I can have a chance to become a director. And if possible, I’d like to go abroad to study more about that.
This is my dream. It is not an easy thing but I will try my best to make it come true.
教师点评：这就是一位在生活中酷爱摄影的小女孩，说起自己的理想，眼里闪着光芒，文章中透出的专业令我刮目相看，坚定而又自信。如今小小的相机镜头后的女孩，可以想象某一天你坐在摄像机后指点“江山”的帅气！Sharon一定是你忠实的影迷！
My Dream Job——Unicorn Hunter
锦绣小学五3班 安涵钰
I want to be a unicorn hunter. Last year, I bought a toy unicorn. It looks like a little white horse with a bright sharp horn on its forehead. And it is considered to be one of the “Mythical Animals” in USA, like the dragon in China. American girls are crazy about him. And the “hunter” in unicorn hunter does not mean hunting animals. It means somebody who gets close to the unicorns and research something about them.
Unicorns live in deep forest so we must enter into the forest. Unicorns are afraid of big sounds. So you have to stay still for a long time. Then, if you are lucky enough, unicorns will come out. You can use a pair of special glasses to see through the bones and find out the secrets of its DNA. So we can copy them and save them from extermination. And I also want to find out the secrets of the unicorn’s horn. Because some movies showed that unicorns’ horns had magic powers. So I’m going to find out whether it is true or not. I’m so excited to make my dream come true when I grow up.
Dreams can’t be easy, but dreams can be achieved if you have enough courage and effort. Julius Fucik said, “Face up live with smiles no matter what happens.” So do I.
教师点评：初看，的确不清楚这个职业是做什么的，顿时感觉代沟的存在。新新人类的想法也促使老师们不断地学习、不断地与时俱进。文中非常详细地解释了特殊职业的意义，尤其注重上下文的逻辑关系，最让我欣慰的是，小作者真的将英语作为了表达的工具，写自己所想，是件幸福的事！
My Dream Job--Football Player
锦绣小学五3班 陈皓元
Sometimes I want to be a traveller. Because I want to travel around the world. Sometimes I want to be a vet. Because I like to take care of animals. Sometimes I want to be a pilot. Because I want to fly an aeroplane. But today I will tell you my dream job is a football player.
When I was a child, I usually watched the football matches. And how to play football well? Practise more and more. I think if you want to play football well and become a football star, firstly you will have a strong body and have good skills. I think Messi is a football star in my mind. He is in Barcelona club. He can play football very well. My dream is one day I can take a photo with Messi. If I am a football player, I want to go to the Barcelona club. I want to attend a match twice a week.
In the future, if I can’t become a football player. I think I will be a strong, successful and open-minded man one day. That’s good.
教师点评：小作者在课堂上思维非常活跃，勇于表达，相信足球场上也会是一名勇猛的健将。文章开头与众不同，这正是有梦的年龄，好羡慕。第二段中心明确，我们常常担忧这一代人心中偶像的形象，看来他的阳光与满满的正能量让我们很放心。
My Dream Job—— Teacher
锦绣小学五3班 马奕辰
Everyone has a dream job. My dream job is to be an English teacher.
Why do I want to be an English teacher? Because I like Sharon and the children, I also like my English class. I want to be a teacher like Sharon and make more friends with children.
As an English teacher, I want to teach the students English, help them express their ideas in English and communicate with them after class. I can point out the students’ mistake, help them correct it. And I can make friends with my students. In my class, I wish all the children like my lessons.
If I want to be an English teacher, I should study hard now, and try to be admitted to a good school in the future. I will try my best to realize my dream. This is my dream job, to be an English teacher. Come on, be the best whatever I am.
教师点评
随着不断地成长，会遇到不同的人或事，会有不同的梦想。很荣幸，能成为影响小作者寻找梦想的那个人，言语中流露着单纯与美好。祝愿美梦成真！
My Dream Job——Teacher
锦绣小学五3班 何源彬
Somebody wants to be a pilot. Somebody wants to be a cook. Somebody wants to be an artist. But I want to be a teacher.
I think teachers are like gardeners. They are smart and great. They are kind to students. And they always answer our questions patiently.
Teachers can read, write, teach and so on. They teach students Chinese, math and English.You can see them at schools. They work in the teachers offices, gyms or classrooms.
I want to be a teacher because my mother is a teacher, too. She knows many things and always talks to me very kindly. And I want to teach students knowledge. I am good at speaking and learning. I have read many books. So I know some interesting things. And I can answer my students many questions. If I am a teacher, I will teach my students how to study, how to play and how to have a rest. If I am a teacher, I will play with my students. If I am a teacher, I will talk to my students patiently…
This is my dream job. And I need to be hardworking and kind. I will try my best to make the dream come true.
教师点评
小作者有较强的英语表达能力，比较关注上下文的衔接与逻辑关系，内容层层递进，并能够尝试用排比句进行表达，体现了语言的美感。所以，写作就是锻炼我们思考能力和形成不同思维的过程，坚持必有成效。
梦想Dream
Any great dream starts from the minor action!
任何伟大的梦想都是从微不足道的行动开始的！
