【简介】感谢网友“网络整理”参与投稿,这里小编给大家分享一些,方便大家学习。
1.邀请信2.申请信/求职信3.告知信.4.感谢信
5.推荐信6.建议信7.道歉信8.祝贺信9.投诉信
10.求助信11.普通书信/电子邮件
1.邀请信
[写作思路]
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信,在写作时,语气要热情真挚,不要强人所难, 其结构为:
①表明写作意图,向某人发出邀请。②说明邀请的具体原因,邀请的内容。③期待对方 接受邀请,并表示感谢。
[经典句式]
1.开头常用语
(DWere throwing a surprise party for....Wed like to invite you to.../Its my honor to invite you to...
我们将为.....举办惊喜派对。我们想邀请你...../我非常荣幸地邀请你.....
②We are having/planning... on... and we feel it would be a great idea if you can join us.
我们将于.....举行.....,如果你能加入我们就太好了。
(§)1 am writing to invite you to.../Im writing to tell you that there will be a...
我写信邀请你...../我写信告诉你有一个(场).....
(4)1 am very pleased to invite you to participate in...to be held from...to...in... 我很高兴邀请你参加从......到......在举行的......
⑤It is my pleasure/a great honor for me to invite you to...
如能邀请你参加…是我莫大的荣幸。
2.主体部分常用语
①Here are some details about this activity./The following are some details about this activity./Some details about this activity are as follows.活动的细节如下。
(2)1 would like to meet you there and please let me know your decision soon.
我想在那里见到你,请尽快告诉我你的决定。
③I am sure you will have a good time at...
我相信你们在.....将会玩得开心。
3.结尾常用语
①I would feel very honored 迁 you could come.AVe would appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your early convenience./An early reply is appreciated.
如果你能来,我将倍感荣幸。/如果你能尽早在統椎时确认参加,我们将不胜感激。/ 感激你的早日回复。
②My phone number is.../Looking forward to...
我的电话号码是....../盼望......%
③My family and I would feel much honored if you could come.
如果你能来,我和我的黎*£感到非常荣幸。
(4)1 hope that you wont decline my invitation.
Kr
我希望你不会拒绝我的邀请。
⑤ Would you please drop me a line to let me know if you can come to...? 如果你能来.....请写信告诉我,好吗?
⑥ If you are interested in it, let me know and Fll send you more information. 如果你对此感兴趣,告诉我,我会给你发送更多的信息。
[黄金模板]
Dear ,(邀请对象)
Hows everything with you?Im writing to tell you that there will be a (活动)at/in (地点)on (时间).I wonder 迁 you,d like to go with me.(发出邀请)
The occasion will start at .(具体时间)This will be followed by a .(迸一步 的安排)At around (时间),.(另一个安排)
If you are interested in it,let me know. Hope to meet you at the ./I really hope you
can make it.(再 次邀请)My phone number is (电话号码).Looking forward to .
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
[范文鉴赏]
Dear Jim,
Im writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday.I intend to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp. I wonder if youd like to go with me.(点 出活动; 发出邀请)
This camp will open on July 20th.It offers teenagers,like you and me,a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture.If you are interested in it,let me know and T11 send you more information.(具体时间、大致内容等)
Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer.(再次邀请)
Yours,
Li Hua
【高考真题】
[2023-全国卷III】
假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加,内容包
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】Dear Allen,
How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And Fm writing to invite you to join us.
The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【思路分析】本文是邀请信。
首先确定提纲。先介绍写作目的,提出邀请。然后告知英国朋友音乐节的情况:介绍音乐节的时间、活动安排等具体信息,最后欢迎他表演节目。第二,根据提纲,确定关键T-sJin ,女口: How is everything going? a music festival, in the school hall, The opening ceremony
-w
等。第三,注意选用合适的连接词将各要点串联起来。
【点睛】本文内容完整,详略得当。并使用级句式。如:You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.定语从句□ 提升 了文章档次。
【高考真题】w
(2023-天津卷)
假设你是晨光中学的船器人兴趣小组组长李津,你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际 学校,他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队,参加即将于7月底在天 津举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。
(1)比赛的时间、地点;
(2)邀请他的原因;
(3)训练计划将发送其邮箱,请他提出建议。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾己给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
世界青少年机器人技能竞赛the World Adolescent Robotics Competition
Dear Chris,
Im looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【写作思路】
本篇书面要求写一封邀请信。写作的时候要注意以黎眞一、动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。内容要点包括:1.代表兴趣 小组发出邀请;2.介绍比赛的时间、地点等安说明邀请他的原因,包括Chris曾在 机器人技能竞赛中获奖;4.告诉他训练诛划将发送其邮箱,请他提出建议。
二、写作时注意准确运用时态,膏本文来说,以一般将来时为主,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【满分参考范文】Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics Competition will be held in Tianjin at the end of July. Hearing that you once took part in a Robotics Skills Competition and won an award, I, on behalf of the Robotics Hobby Group, intend to invite you to join our team in the coming competition. I am sure that your involvement
will not only help us in winning the award but also enhance the friendship between our two schools.
With this email I also send you our training plan, about which I wish to get your advice because you are more experienced than us. We sincerely hope that we can participate in the competition as team partners.
Yours,
Li Jin
【高考真题】
[2023-全国卷II】
假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他 写封邮件,内容包括:
1.展览时间、地点;
2.展览内容。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.
题目要求写封邮件邀请外教参观中国剪纸艺术展。写作情境设置真实,任务要求符合学生能力水平,自然地融入了我国优秀传统文化(剪纸paper-cutting)的内容,能够引导学生在 使用外语了解世界的同时,注重传承发扬中华民族优秀文明成果,运用中国元素讲中国故事, 增强文化自信。该写作贴近学生生活,学生有话可说。考生成文时应注意:1.结构釆用三
段成文:第一段自我介绍并引出话题;第二段具体交代活动时间、地点;第三段较为详细地交代展览内容。2.时态:以一般将来时和一般现在时为主。3.人称:第一人称。4.注意恰 当使用一些连词,使文章自然、流畅。5.适当使用一些高级词汇和句型以提高作文档次。
【满分参考范文】
Dear Henry,
Im Li Hua, one of your students in your cultural class. I know youre interested in one of Chinese traditional art forms一paper-cutting. So I invite you to attend an exhibition of it.
Itll be held from June 10 to July 10 this year and the opening time is from 9: 00 am to 7: 00 pm from Monday to Saturday and the place of the exhibition is at the City Gallery, which is located at 118, Jian Guo Road, Hai Dian District. Shall we go there together this Friday afternoon?
I will meet you at 2: 00 pm at the teaching building gate if you like.
You know we Chinese have a lot of traditional art forms, of which paper-cutting is one of the most popular. In the exhibition, you will enjoy many special kinds of paper-cuttings. Maybe you can learn one or two skills of the cutting.
Regards, Li Hua
【高考真题】
[2023-全国卷III】
假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封 邮件邀请他加入,内容包括:
1.球队活动;
2.报名方式及截止日期。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
【满分参考范文】Dear Eric,
I am Li Hua. I am writing to invite you to join the table tennis team in our school. It is known that we can benefit a lot from playing table tennis. It can prevent us from getting shortsighted and it can keep us physically healthy. As to the activities, we plan to invite experienced players to giving training to us every Friday afternoon.
At the same time, we will divide the members into several groups to practice at 5:00pm after school.
If you are interested, sign up on our school website before August 10.
Yours,
Li Hua
【高考真题】
(2023-浙江卷)
第一节应用文写作
假定你是李华,计划组织一次郊游,请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内 容包括:
1.参加者;
2.时间、地点;
3.活动:登山、野餐等。
注意:
r
本试题是一篇半开列鮮沒,写作文体是电子邮件,写一封邀请信给Chris。要点提示 中只列出了大概内容,包扌藍3点(参加者,时间、地点和活动),具体细节需要考生自己发挥。
邀请信一般分为以下几部分:首先,要列出写信的目的,并发出诚挚邀请;其次,要就邀请的具体内容给予明确的说明,什么时间,什么地点,做什么事情等;最后,要再次表示邀请, 希望对方参加。
【满分参考范文】Dear Chris,
How are you now? ①The purpose of my writing is to tell you that there will be an outgoing for us these days. I would be honored to have you there with us, enjoying the colorful days.
The occasion will start on the next Sunday morning. ②We will go to Siming Mountain, where we can have a climb. Whafs more, we can also hold a picnic party with the local people.
I really hope you can make it. And I do look forward to receiving your reply letter as soon as possible.
申请信/求职信
[写作思路]
申请信有很多种,比如求职申请、加入某组织或活动的申请、报考申请、留学申请等,其目的在于让对方了解自己的经验、能力、成就以及愿望等,所以个人情况的介绍应该是申请信的核心内容,应尽可能向对方说明本人的长处,以便留下好印象,获得面谈的机会。由于此类题目常有较多的文字提示,写作时除应注意格式上的要求外,也应注意审题全面,不能遗漏要点,并要注意人称和时态的变化,避免出现逻辑混乱。其结构为:①点明目的, 自我介绍,点出信息来源②详述个人优势,简述个人要求③表达感谢,简述获准后的打算, 期待对方优先考虑。
[经典句式]
1.开头常用语
①I learned on your website that...
我从你们的网站上得知.....
②Im writing to apply for the position of...
我写信申请.....的职位。
(§)1 am writing this letter to recommend myself as a qu 我写信推荐自己为的合格人选。
④I am interested in...and wish to enter this significant program. 我对.....感兴趣,希望加入到这戸義项目中。
⑤I am writing to you in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to... 我写信给你是希望我可物*个.....的机会。
2.主体部分常用语蘿
①As an outgoing...! get along well with my classmates.
作为一名外向的.....我和同学们相处得很好O
②For one thing,! can help...For another thing,! can improve my English,make more friends,and enrich my life.
一方面,我能帮助...…另一方面,我能提高我的英语水平,结交更多的朋友,并充实生 活。
③I am confident that Im suitable for.../rm qualified to do.../Im equal to (doing)...
我确信,我适合...../我有做的资格/我能胜任(做).....
3.结尾常用语
①I would appreciate it if I have the chance of doing/to do...
如果我有做.....的机会,我将不胜感激。
②Should you offer me an interview,! would be most grateful.Looking forward to your reply
soon.
如果您能给我提供面试的机会,我将非常感激。期待您的早日答复。
③I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience. 期待在您方便的时候给我一个肯定的答复。
④I would greatly appreciate it 迁you could take my application into consideration. 如果您能考虑我的申请,我将不胜感激。
[黄金模板1]
Dear Sir/Madam,
..(简单自我介绍)When I was reading the advertisement, 看到相关广告后的感受)1 think ifs a good opportunity for me to 因)Therefbre I recommend myself to you without hesitation.
..(陈述本人的性格优势)For one thing,! can
Looking forward to your reply.(表达期望)
Yours truly,
Li Hua
[高考真题]
[2023-全国卷I】
假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要剧版中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.个人优势;
3.能做的事情。
注意::
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.结束语已为你写好。
Yours,
Li Hua.
【写作思路】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。
本篇书面表达属于应用文甘要求考生写申请信,人称使用第一人称和第二人称,时态用
2.谋篇布局
书信格式,称呼和落款文中己经给出。首段,写信的目的,中间段写个人优势和能做的事,最后一段总结。
3.关键词
根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇有:volunteer,
a Chinese Painting Exhibition, local city, advantages, a good command of, beneficial for, familiarity with, appreciate , take my application into consideration□通过词汇铺垫,我4]就 很容易地行文了,文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误,并增加一些细节和过 渡性.的词汇,如 First of all, Besides, to begin with, moreover, as for me, Last but not least, 等,使全文衔接自然,语义流畅。
【参考范文】Dear sir or madam,
I am a Chinese student named Li Hua, who is studying in London during the summer vacation. Knowing that the local art gallery will hold an exhibition of Chinese paintings, I am writing to apply for volunteering. As a student who has learned Chinese painting since 5 years old, I am very pleased to have an opportunity to introduce Chinese paintings to foreigners.
Besides, my fluent spoken English and rich knowledge about Chinese paintings will help visitors understand the meaning behind each painting deeply. I will appreciate it if I could be given the opportunity.
Yours,
Li Hua.
【点睛】
本文首段开门见山,表达了写信的目的;第2段详细介绍了个人的优势和能做的事情,
an outgoing boy, who is studying in London.此处使用了 同位语限制性定语从句。having
heard that a Chinese Painting Exhibition will be held in this local city.使用 了分词做状语和宾语 从句及被动语态。having lived in China for sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a
...
child, I have a good command of English and Chinese, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings.使用了分词和非限制性定语从句。另外First of all, Besides, Last but not least的使用 使文章富有条理性。此外,还使用了高级句式结构,如I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration 条4牛羽t语从句。
【高考真题2】
第一节应用文写作
假定你是李华,你校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘, 内容包括:
1.口语能力:
2.相关经验;
3.应聘目的。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.
【写作思路】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写应聘信。
第一步:根据提示可知,学校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生。要求写封应聘信,内容包括:
1.口语能力:2.相关经验;3.应聘目的。
第二步:根据写作要求确定关键词(组)。
第四步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之礒紿接和过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数罷。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,
[参考范文】Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association.
I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native speakers of English. Whafs more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students.
Im particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills.
Hopefully I can receive your acceptance.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
告知信
[写作思路]
告知信多是从个人角度出发,将对方想要了解的事情告诉对方,让对方知道。告知的
内容涉及广泛:如计划安排类,课外活动类,招聘广告类,个人近况类,地点建筑类等。
首段:介绍信息来源,点明告知内容;
中间段:具体介绍告知的内容;
结尾段:表达意愿进一步提供信息。
注意:告知语气要客观而不失友好,内容真实但可以有自己的观点和看法。
【经典句式】
首段;信息来源
1.Thank you for your last letter asking about our library.
谢谢你来信询问我们的图书馆。
2.My schedule for the coming summer vacation goes as follows.
对即将到来的暑假我的安排如下。
3.Im so glad to learn that you are coming in September. Fve found a place for you. 很高兴得知你九月要来。我己经为你找到一个地方食V
4.Im so happy to know that you are interested in Chinese traditional arts from your letter. 我很高兴从你的信中得知你对中国传统艺术很感兴趣。
5.How time flies! I am more than delighted to receive your e-mail. Its a pleasure
to inform you of my plan of this coming summer vacation after the college entrance examination. 臨攵到你的邮件。很高兴告诉你高考后我暑假的计划。
6.1 read in a newspaper today that a "Learn Chinese,Sing Chinese Songs"Foreigners Talent S how will be held in
Beijing Television Station on July 18.
我在报上看到“学中文,唱中文歌”外国人才艺表演将于7月18日在北京电视台举行。
7.1 am more than glad to receive your e-mail asking for my plan of the coming summer holid ay. I have worked out my schedule. My plans/arrangements are as follows.
我很高兴收到你的邮件,问我即将到来的暑假计划。我已经制订好了我的计划。安排如下.
结尾段:表达愿望
1 .If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.
如果有什么我能为你做的,我会非常乐意都助。
2. If you have any other questions, please let me know. Im looking forward to your coming. 如界您有任何其他同题,请让我知道。我期待念的到来。
3.If you have any other questions, please dont hesitate to turn to me for help.
如果你有任何其他问题,不要犹豫,找我帮忙
4.Would you be so kind as to give me some practical tips? Hopefully,
I will have a colorful and meaningful summer vacation. I am eagerly looking forward to your kind reply.
你能给我一些有用的建议吗?希望我会有一个丰富多彩的暑假,我热切地期盼你的回复。
5.Do you think youd like so? If not, I can try and find another place for you. Just let me know.
你认为你会喜欢吗?如果不是的话。我可以给你另找地方。:.貝是得让我知道。
【黄金模板】
• 折
① 1 am more than glad to receive your e-mail asking for my plan of the coming summer
holiday. (2)1 have worked out my schedule. My plans/arrangements are as follows.
件事)。⑥What do you think of my plan?
⑦Do you have better advice for my plan? /Would you be so kind as to give me some practical tips?⑧ Id appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
【高考真题1】
[2023-全国卷II】
假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛,内 容包括:
L比赛信息;
2.赛前准备;
3.表达期待。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.
【答案】
Dear Chris,
Im writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month. The match will
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take place in our school gym on the afternoon of July 4*^^^话ill play against the team from HongXing High School. In order to win the match, we sifduld get fully prepared and practice hard.
So from tomorrow, we need to train for two hours after school every day. Please come to the school gym at 6:30 pm from Monday to Friday.
Youre an excellent player. With you on the team, we are confident that we can win the game.
Li Hua
【写作思路】要求考生写一封邮件告知队友有关比赛的信息。
本篇书面表达是一封告知信。首先要告知写信目的;然后简明扼要地告知排球比赛的时间、地点以及赛前的准备事项,注意事件信息的三要素:时间、地点、人物,要交代清楚;第三则要表达对队友的期待和鼓励。
【点睛】本文内容完整,详略得当,并运用了高级句式。rm writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month.宾语从句;In order to win the match 不定式彳乍 目 状语。文章语言流畅,上下文转换自然。
【高考真题2】
[2023-全国卷 III]
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信,内
容包括:
1.学校的体育场馆;
2.主要的运■动项目;
3.你喜欢的项目。
注意:1.词数100左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【写作思路】
本题作文为应用文,即给英国朋友Peter介绍学校体育运动情况,属于学校生活话题。 这一话题贴合学生生活的实际,学生并不陌生,奇国可说。
首先可以介绍学校的体育场馆,场馆的位置,大小,开放时间等等。然后简要介绍学校主要开设的体育项目有哪些,可挑选早间两个做详细介绍,如学生的活动时间,活动形式, 以及此类活动的好处等。再次简要分析自己喜欢的体育项目是什么,并简单分析喜欢的原因, 自己从中得到的益处等。;緋*主要釆用一般现在时态,第一人称的方式来写。
【满分参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.
To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, Im intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.
All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.
Yours,
Li Hua
【高考真题3】
[2023-全国卷I】
假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计 划。内容包括:
(1)时间和地点;
(2)内容:学习唐诗;
(3)课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
I am very happy thatmade great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested
in Chinese culture. Now Ill tell you the next learning programme. On July 20, we are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which you are interested in in the Lecture Hall. As a foreign learner, it is difficult for you to understand the true meaning and the culture of them. Therefore, before class, you can read some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems.
Be sure to go to the Lecture Hall on time. You cannot miss the wonderful poems.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】随着时代的发展,电子邮件越来越受广大中学生的欢迎,所以写电子邮件是中
学生经常做的事,这种形式的写作贴近学生生活,使他们感到熟悉。考生成文时应注意:1.
要点要齐全:(1)时间和地点;(2)内容:学习唐诗;(3)课前准备:简要了解唐朝的 历史。2.时态:以一般现在时为主;3.人称:第二人称为主;4.注意恰当使用一些连词, 使文章自然、流畅。5.适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。
【高考真题4】
(2023年•新课标I卷)假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写 封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括:
(1)时间和地点;
(2)内容:学习唐诗;
(3)课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【思路分析】本文要求写哪沛告知外国朋友汉语课的时间和内容。
文体:书信体,一种常见的告知信,相对简单
人物关系:朋友
问,候语及开头语:How are you? / How is everything going? / How are things with you?
/I am writing to you about..../1 am writing to tell you something about....
写信目的:告知上课时间,内容及课前准备
结束语如:Looking forward to seeing you again. / Looking forward to your early reply. /Hope to hear from you soon / Best wishes.
【满分参考范文】
Dear Leslie,
I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese culture. Now Ill tell you the next learning programme. On July 20, we are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which you are interested in in the Lecture Hall. As a foreign
learner, it is difficult for you to understand the true meaning and the culture of them. Therefore, before class, you can read some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems.
Be sure to go to the Lecture Hall on time. You cannot miss the wonderful poems.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【高考真题5】
假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习
俗。请你回复邮件,内容包括:
注意:
2可以适当增加细节以使行文嚅..
【思路分析】
本文是一篇电子邮件类应用文写作。餐桌礼仪也是考生比较熟悉的话题。成文时注意以
下几点:一、内容要点要齐全1.到达时间;2.合适的礼物;3.餐桌礼仪。二、时态:主
要用一般现在时和将来时;三、人称:第二、三人称。四、注意使用恰当的高级词汇、短语
或句型,以提高作文的水平;五、适当使用一些连接词和插入语,使文章表达自然、流畅。
布局谋篇:第一段内容:问候对方,马上呈现对方所涉及的话题,拜访中国家庭,做客时间的要求和忌讳!第二段内容:做客拜访的合适礼物,可以适当延展,初次拜访,亲密朋友之间拜访,二次拜访,家庭情况适合的礼物,通用的礼物等。第三段:table manners,可以描 述两三个通常的中国人的餐桌礼节和忌讳的地方,有鲜明特色之处,最后一句表达祝愿。
3.时态,给对方的建议和说明,用一般现在时,描述风俗礼仪这是客观规律性的东西,用一 般现在时。
【满分参考范文】Dear Terry,
How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some advice.
Firstly, I would like to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in
Chinese traditional culture. Secondly, if I were you, I would bring some appropriate gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country. Besides, table manners are also what you should pay
attention to. For example, you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. Instead, laying them on your dish is a smart choice.
If you have any other problems, please dont hesitate to contact me.
Yours
Li Hua
【高考真题】
(2023年•天津卷)假设你是李津,与你以前的外籍教师Mrs. Green 一直保持联系。近 日她来信询问你的近况,请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。
(1)简要介绍自己的学习和生活;
(2)告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者,并介绍为此所做的准 备(如深入了解天津等);
(3)希望她有机会重访天津。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头己给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:第十三届全运会the 13th National Games
Dear Mrs. Green,
Im glad to hear from you.
Yours, Li Jin
【满分参考范文】Dear Mrs. Green,
Im so glad to hear from you. While it has been more than a year since you taught us English, Fve missed you a lot, thinking about those happy moments when we stayed with you. Actually, Fve been doing pretty well in my studies as well as in my life. Apart from my academic studies, I always manage to find time for what Pm interested in. For example, I have successfully got admitted as a volunteer for the 13th National Games, which is scheduled to be held at the end of this August. To get admitted, I have made good preparations beforehand, trying to know as much as I could about my city, Tianjin.
By the way, ifs my sincere hope that you can spare some time for a visit to Tianjin again, which has changed greatly since you left.
Please let me know if you come to Tianjin.
Yours, Li Jin
5.感谢信
[题型特点]
感谢信是重要的礼仪文书,是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的书信,有感谢和表扬双重意思。其结构为:
①点明写信目的②描述事件经过③再次表示感谢,表达回报心情
[常用句式]
1.开头常用语
①I am writing to extend my thanks/convey my gratitude to you for...
我写这封信是因为表达我对你的感激。
②I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for...
在信中我要为.....向您表达我诚挚的谢意。
③Thank you so much for the gift you sent me.Ifs one of the most wonderful gifts I ever got. 非常感谢你给我寄来的礼物,这是我收到的最好的礼物之一。
④Id like to take this opportunity to express my appreciation for your timely help and assistance.
我谨借此机会表达对您给予我们及时的帮助和支持的感激。
⑤On behalf of my whole family,! would like to extend my sincere gratitude for... 我谨代表我全家对.....表示真诚的感激之情。
(6)1 will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness by... 如果我有机会通过.....报答你的好意,我会非蜿歎
⑦Many thanks for all the things you have done in helping us to...
非常感谢你为帮助我们.....所做的扌。
2.结尾常用语
①Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories,we will remember them forever. 没有什么能抹掉我们美好的记忆,我们会永远牢记在心。
②Again,I would like Wexpress my warm thanks to you! /Thanks again for your kind help.
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我再次对你表示衷心的感谢。/对你的热心帮助再次表示感谢。
③Please accept my sincere thanks and best wishes.
请接受我诚挚的感谢和最美好的祝愿O
[黄金模板]
Dear ,(感谢对象)
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude to you for .(感谢的原因)If it had not been for your assistance in ,(对方给你的具体帮助)1 fear that I would have been .(没有对方帮助的结果)
Everyone agrees that it was you who .(给出纟田节)
Again,! would like to express my warm thanks to you (Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
[范文鉴赏]
Dear Li Ping,
How about your life?rm writing to thank you for your warm reception during my visit to Beijing this summer holiday.(感谢的原因)
During the visit,! stayed at your home,and you cooked three delicious meals for me.And you showed me around quite a few places of interest,such as the Great Wall,the Forbidden City and the Summer Palace.Besides,you took many beautiful photos of me.Whafs more,you went shopping with me. I really had a wonderful time.Another thing that I should mention is that your parents were so kind to drive us.(具体帮助的细节)
Thank you for your kindness again and give my best regards to your parents.(再次感谢)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【2023•浙江卷】应用文写作(满分15分)
假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将期簪的国家。请给他写一封
1.表示感谢;
2.回顾Alex对你的帮助;
【范文】
Dear Chris,
I am so regretful to know that you are going to return to your home before long. We get along well during your stay in China and you offered me lots of help. I would like to express my gratitude to you for your help with my English. While studying in China, you always spent your free time in helping me polish up my oral English. It is you who shared me with rich knowledge of
English and English culture. Never will I forget you and your kindness. It is my hope that you can remember me as often as possible.
Y ours,
Li Hua
[题型特点]
从推荐者的情况来分,可以分为自荐信和推荐信两种。其结构为:
推荐信①自我介绍及所推荐人物②推荐理由③期待对方回复,并表示感谢 [常用句式]
1.开头常用语
①Im very pleased to learn that you are going to...Im writing this letter to offer my
recommendation.
得知你将.....我很高兴,我写这封信是向你提供我的建议。
② Please allow me to introduce one of my best friends to you.
请允许我向你介绍一位我最好的朋友。
(§)1 am writing to introduce one of my college classmates in Beijing.
我写信是要介绍一位我在北京时的大学同学。
④I am very glad to have this chance to write to you to...
我很高兴能有这次机会给你写信
①The reason why I recommen^yis that...
我推荐.....的原因是 .....
②So I hold the belief that... be(am/is/are)quite suitable fbr the post.
所以我相信.....很适合这个职位。
3.结尾常用语
①Thanks for your attention and hope to receive your reply.
多谢你的关注,希望能收到你的回复。
(2)1 would be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.
如果你能对我予以仔细考虑我将不胜感激。
③I would be most grateful if you could lend due attention to this letter and contact me at...
如果你能给予此信一定的关注并通过.....和我联系,我将非常感激。
④Ill be more than happy if you can take my suggestions/ideas into consideration. 如果你能考虑我的建议/想法,我会非常高兴。
[黄金模板1]
Dear
Im .(自我介绍)1 was asked to write to you to recommend (要推荐的人)to be/do (要做的职位或事情).
His/Her performance was outstanding.He/She is a diligent boy/girl,who can .(优势 一 )Whafs more, .(优 势 二)Em sure he/she can .Therefore,! here recommend him/her to you with all my heart.
If you have any questions about it,please contact me.
Looking forward to your coming.(表达期望)
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
[黄金模板2]
Dear ,
①It affords me much pleasure to recommend (要推荐白勺人)to you.②During his/her graduate years he/she was my .③ As his/her I found hinVher (介绍与此人的关系).筋
④His/Her performance in the school years was outstanding^ @First,he/she had been and showed great talents in .⑥In addition,he/she has a very pleasant personality. ©He has developed a strong sense of ,and forking with him is always.(8)1 can state that he/she has all the qualities of being .(介绍此人的能力)
©Therefore,! here recommend him/her to you with all my heart.©Should you favor him/her
V
with a position in your company/Should you accept him/her in your university? I am sure that his/her future conduct/academic work will prove worthy of your confidence.! look forward to hearing from you at the earliest possible moment.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
[范文鉴赏]
Dear Peter,
Im Li Ming,Chairman of the Students5 Union. Ifs great to hear that you are coming to teach in our school next semester. I was asked to write to you to recommend Li Hua,a Senior 3 student of 18,to be your assistant.(自我介绍;推荐人的情况)
Her performance in the school years was outstanding.Li Hua is a diligent girl,who can use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others. Whafs more,she is one of the top ten students in our school,and her spoken English is extremely excellent.Tm sure she can be helpful in your work and life in China.Therefore,I here recommend her to you with all my heart.(推荐人的优势)
If you have any questions about it,please contact me.
Looking forward to your coming.(表达期望)
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【高考真题】
(2023-北京卷)
第一节
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化
感兴趣,计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件,内容包括:
(1)表示欢迎;
(2)推荐他上哪所大学;
(3)建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意:(1).词数不少于50;
(2).开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
本文为提纲式作文,文章要求写推荐信,为英国朋友介绍北京的大学。首先可以介绍一下写作背景(Jim对中国文化感兴趣,要来中国学习),表达欢迎。然后推荐一所大学,并 简要介绍推荐的原因(如大学的特色,可以学到什么等)。再次简单介绍应该做哪方面的准 备,如可以提前学习汉语,读点有关中国传统文化的书,了解中国的习俗,让自己更好地适 应中国的生活。文章可釆用一般现在时,人称可以使用第二人称。
【满分参考范文】Dear Jim,
Fm so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.
Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.
I sincerely hope your dream will come true and its my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
建议信
[题型特点]
建议信是生活中常见的一种文体,是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。建议信可能是写给个人,也可能是写给某个组织或机构,信的内容要包括写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具合理性和说服力。
具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”,通常以firstly,secondly, thirdly或to begin/start with,then,later,last but not least等依次陈述建议,具体结构为:
①表明写作意图
②具体的建议及理由
③指出釆纳建议的好处
[常用句式]
1.开头常用语
①I know you have trouble in...after reading your letter.I am writing to give you some suggestions/give you a hand.
在读了你的信后,我知道你在.....上有困难。我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/帮助。
②Youve asked me for advice with regard to/regarding.. .and Fll try to make some useful suggestions here.
关于.....你向我征求建议,在此,我将尽力提出一些有用的建议。
③Im sorry to know that you are having trouble with/in doing...at the moment. 得知此刻你遇到.....麻烦我深感遗憾。
④Im very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how... 非常高兴收到你的来信,在信中,关于如何.....你向我征求意见。
2.主体部分常用语
①When it comes to/As for...I would like to suggest/recommend...
涉及/关于我想建议.....
②The following are my suggestions./My suggestions are as follows.
我的建议如下。
(3)In my opinionZPersonally/As far as Im concerned,it would be wise to take the following action.
在我看来,釆取如下行动是明智的。
④You may/might as well do...
你不妨做.....
⑤I would like to suggest that...
我想建议
⑥If I were you,! would...
如果我是你,我会
©It seems to me that you could...
我认为你可以
⑧ I think it would be more beneficial if you could... 我想如果你能.....可能会更有利。額
(Di hope you will find these suggestions helpful./I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you.
我希望你认为这些建议有帮助。/我希望我的建议对你有益。
② I hope you will take my advice into consideration. If you have any questions or requirements,please do not hesitate to tell me./If you have any questions,please feel free to ask me at any time.
我希望你会考虑我的建议。如果你有任何问题或要求,请毫不犹豫地告诉我。/如果你 有任何问题,请随时问我。
(§)1 believe you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。
[黄金模板1]
Dear ,(建议对象)
Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to .(引 出对方需要 建议的主题)
Here are a few suggestions.(引出作者建议)First,it is important to .Then,it also helps to .Besides,it should be a good idea to .You can also .
可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议,如下:
As to , I suggest .(需要具体到某一方面)In addition, .(其他 的建议)Imsure .(预测可能的结果,给对方以行动的信心和决心)
I hope .(表达愿望)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
[黄金模板2]
Dear
① You have asked me for my advice with regard to ,and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.
(2)In my humble opinion,you would be wise to take the following actions: (建议的内容).
(§)1 hope you will find these proposals useful,and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【高考真题】
(2023,北京卷)
你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条线路可以选择:“长江之 行”或者“泰山之旅"o Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信,内容包括:
1.你建议的线路;
2.你的理由;
3.你的祝愿。
注意:1.词数不少于50;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
【满分参考范文】
本文为提纲类作文。首先,学生要仔细阅读提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。其次,要注意提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。最后,要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态,语态;语言表达要符合英语习惯。本文是一封信,按照内容要求可以确定文章的 框架结构,三段式,其中第一段写你所建议的路线,第二部分是本文的主体,要阐述你所建 议的路线的原因,好让 他们有很好的掌握,最后一段,提出你的祝愿。写作时要注意准确 运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要 合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
【答案】
Dear Jim,
Im happy to receive your letter and know you5re coming to China.
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. Thafs why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
Hope you511 have a good time in China.
Yours, Li Hua
道歉信
[题型特点]
道歉信是因过失或疏忽做错了事,给别人带来了麻烦或损失,发觉后为了给对方赔礼道歉而写的信件。其结构为:①表明写作意图,对某事表示歉意②说明道歉的具体原因③再次 表明歉意,请求谅解,并提出补救措施。
[常用句式]
1.开头常用语
①I am writing this letter to apologize to you for...
我写这封信是因......向你道歉。
②I am writing to express/convey my deepest apology to you.
我写信向你表达我深深的歉意。
2.主体部分常用语
(Di regret to inform you that I can not/am unable to...
我遗憾地告知你我不能......
(2)1 am sorry for my not being able to...due to the fact that...
我非常抱歉我不能.....因为.....
③Much to my regret J was unable to... and I wish that my apology could help to some extent. 很遗憾,我不能够希望我的道歉在某种程度上能起到作用。
④I remember we planned to...but now because...I cannot...with you as planned.
我记得我们原本计划.....但是现在由于.....我不能与你如期.....
⑤I must apologize for any inconvenience it may have caused you.
为此事可能给你带来的任何不便,我深表歉意。
3.结尾常用语
©Once again,Im sorry for any inconvenience caused.
对于造成的任何不便我再次表示歉意。
②I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies. 我衷心地希望你能够站在我的角度考虑一下,并接經蟲歉。
④I sincerely hope that you will kindly accept my apologies. 我衷心希望你能友好地接受我的例Q
[黄金模板]
Dear
..(陈述道歉原因)Now I am writing you this letter of
apology to show my deep regret.
I hope you will understand me and excuse me for
由)The reason for my delay/absence was/is that
I sincerely hope that you can accept my apology and understand it. I would appreciate your ..(提出*卜救措施)Once again,Fm sorry for any inconvenience caused.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
[范文鉴赏]
Dear Tom,
I am indeed very sorry that I am unable to go to Beijing with you next weekend,which I have promised.I feel sorry about it and want you to know what happened.(直接说 出写信意图)
Just now,my cousin Li Qiong,who left home for Australia for his further study last year5informed me that he would return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family. You know,we havent seen each other for nearly a year.(说明道歉的具体 原因)
I sincerely hope you can accept my apology and understand it.I would appreciate your allowing me to make another date to show you around Beijing.Once again,Pm sorry for any inconvenience caused.(再次希望对方接受道歉;提出补救措施)
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
祝贺信
[题型特点]
祝贺信应包括以下内容
1.如何获得消息2.消息内容3.得知消息后的激动心情4.表达祝贺5.继续保持业务/私人来 往6.送上祝贺语
[常用句式]
Wishing you a blessed St. Valentines Day and joyful holidays.
2.We want to wish you a happy Mothers day.
3.May your marriage be the beginning of a new period od domestic happiness!
4.Please accept our best and sincerest wishes for the New Year.
5.wishing you many happy returns of your birthday!
6.1 hope you receive my gift.Perhaps it will add a bit to your enjoyment on your birthday.
7.We wish we could be with you to share the occasion.
8.Congratulations on your latest promotion.! know that you will make good in your new job because you thrive on responsibility.
9.Congratulations on the completion and opening of a new office.
黄金模板
Dear ,
(Di have learned with delight that you (祝贺事由).②I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on .③You must be .(4)And I feel very happy for you.
⑤ (所取得的成绩)is quite exciting news!⑥I know this is surely owing to (被祝贺人过去的努力).⑦ It is a reward you richly deserve for your (被祝贺人的优点).
⑧Kindly let me know when you (咨询对方何时有空).⑨I hope (表达自己的愿望).⑩My best wishes for your further success.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
投诉信
[题型特点]
在生活中,通常用写投诉信的方式解决诸如消费利益受损、正常生活和工作受到干扰等问题。
投诉信通常包括以下几个方面的内容:说明投诉的原因并表示遗憾;实事求是地阐述问题发生的经过,切记不要夸大其词;指出问题引起的后果;提出批评及处理的意见或敦促对方釆取措施,或者提出所希望的赔偿以及补救方式。其结构为:
①交代要投诉的问题②描述投诉的原因、问题的经过及产生的后果③提出解决方案 投诉信
[常用句式]
1.开头常用语
①I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with/at...
我写此信表达我对.....的不满。
②Im...who bought...fromyour website several days ago.I am writing to complain about... 我是几天前从你们的网站上购买了.....的.....。我写價毅竄
(3)1 was very disappointed to see...
我非常失望地发现
2.主体部分常用语
(Di have suffered a lot of pains.
(2)1 can hardly put up with it
我再也无法容忍它。
(§)1 am completely disappointed to find...To improve the situation,it is advisable for you to take the following measures./I do hope that someone will take effective measures to deal with this matter.
当我发现.....我彻底失望了。为了改进这种情况,建议你釆取以下措施。/我真的希望 有人能釆取有效措施解决这个问题。
3.结尾常用语
①I would be very delighted if you could consider my complaint seriously.I do hope...will be improved as soon as possible./I do hope you can give me a satisfactory reply as soon as possible.Thank you for your consideration.
如果你能认真对待我的投诉,我会非常高兴。我确实希望.....将会尽快得到改善。/我 确实希望你可以尽快给我一个满意的答复。感谢你的体谅。
② If you do not solve this problem, I will/shall... 如果你们不解决这一问题,我将.....
D...refund the cost and pay me damages.
.....退回费用并赔偿我的损失。
(4)1 hope you will kindly investigate...
我希望你对.....进行调查。
⑤I would like you to get this matter settled by the end of this month.
我想让你月底前解决这件事情。
[黄金模板1]
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is/Fm .(自我介绍)1 am writing to you for something/to tell you something about (投诉的内容).
.(简述导致矛盾的事件)1 .(表达本人曾做过的努 力)But .(投诉原因一Resides, .(投诉原因二)To be frank,
©Under these circumstances,! find it (感觉)to
的后果)
⑦ I appreciate it very much if you could (提出建议和请求),preferably (进一步的要求),and I would like to have this matter settled by (设定解决事情最后期限).⑧Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
[范文鉴赏]
Dear Headmaster,
I am a student in Class One,Grade Two and I am Li Hua.RecentlyJ have found that the waste in our school is very serious.If you go around the school,you will find the lights are burning day and night.In addition,you will also find taps running all the time. In the dining room,food is thrown
away everywhere and there are a lot of useful things in the litter bins.(自我介绍; 投诉内容)
Faced with these phenomena,! feel worried.Although our country is becoming richer and richer now,we still need to save everything because saving is one of virtues of the Chinese.Do you agree with what I said?Would you like to ask all the students to promote saving and oppose waste?I am expecting your answer.(投诉原因;期待解决方案)
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
求助信
[题型特点]
求助信是指写信人就某一个问题向收信人寻求帮助,希望收信人就写信人提出的问题提 供帮助或给出针对性的解决方法。其结构为:
求助信①点明写信目的,清楚表明要寻求什么样的帮助②具体讲述自己的困难,再提出 请求③诚恳地提出希望,表达需要得到帮助的迫切心情*表示感谢
[常用句式]
1.开头常用语
①My namewriting to you for some help.
我的名字是......我写信向你求助1
②Fm writing a letter to you to get some help about...
我给你写信是想得到......方面的一些帮助。
(3)1 am writing to ask you to do me a favor.I have some difficulty in doing...,which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
我写信向你求助。我在做方面有困难,这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向你求助。
2.主体部分常用语
①I have met much difficulty in...
我在......方面遇到了很多困难。
②In the meanwhile/At the same time,I beg you to...so that...
同时,我请求你......这样......
③Im eager to get your timely help./Fm eager for your timely help.
我渴望得到你及时的帮助。
④Faced with/Facing so many difficulties,I have to turn to you for help.
面对如此多的困难,我不得不向你求助。
3.结尾常用语
①I will be very grateful if you could help me.../I would appreciate it if you could do me a
favor and...
如果你能帮助我.....我会非常感激。
②We do hope you can give us some advice.
我们非常希望你能给我们一些建议。
③Looking forward to your reply.And Fd be really thankful. 期待你的回复。我非常感激。
[黄金模板1]
Dear Sir/Madam,
Im .(自我介绍)Im writing to get some help about .(说明写信目
的)
Looking forward to your reply.(表达期望)
Yours truly,
①I am writing to formally request to
②The reason for is that (给出原因).(§)1 : I—(给出细节).
④I would also like to request (提出迸一步的要求).⑤lam sorry for any inconvenience I have caused.
⑥Thank you for your attention to these requests. ©If you have any questions,do not hesitate to contact me at (电话号码).(§)1 look forward to a favorable reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【高考真题】
(2023-全国I卷)
Dear Ms Jenkins,
I am Li Hua.I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a fkvor.(写信 目 的)
In order to get some practical experience,! am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my application and resume.But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume,so I dont know if there is something to pay attention to.(讲述困难)So,Im writing you the letter,hoping you can give me some help.I will be very grateful if you can do me the fkvor.(提出请求)
Looking forward to your reply.And Id be really thankful.(表达期望)
Yours,
Li Hua
普通书信/电子邮件
[题型特点]
英文e-mail和普通书信的写法和格式大体相同,其开头、结尾常常都会给出,正文可 根据作文要求分段把内容表达清楚即可。
[常用句式]
1.开头常用语
①I am very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.
我很高兴收到你两星期前寄给我的信。
②How are you getting along with...
你近来进展如何?
③Sorry to reply to your letter so late.
抱歉这么晚才给你回信。
④There is nothing happier to me than to receive your letter.
再也没有比收到你的春.信更让我开心的了。
⑤I received your e-mail(yesterday/last week/this morning...)
我(昨天/上周/今天早上.....)收到了你的电子邮件。
⑥Your e-mail has been received.
你的邮件已经收到。
2.主体部分常用语
(Drve been thinking about the question you wrote in the letter.In my opinion,you should...
我一直在思考你信中提到的问题。在我看来,你应该.....
(2)If necessary,we can arrange a face-to-face discussion sometime this week.
如果有必要,本周我们可以找个时间安排一次面谈。
3.结尾常用语
①Ill greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience.
请在方便时尽早回信,我将非常感激。
(2)Give my best regards/wishes to your mother.
代我向你的母亲表示良好的祝愿。
(§)1 am looking forward to your earliest reply.
盼望着你早日回复。
©Expecting to hear from you as soon as possible.
盼望能尽快收到你的来信。
[黄金模板]
D ear ,
Im .1 am writing to talk about .(提出主题)1 like it very much mainly for the following reasons.First, , I think,are/is very popular with .(原因 一)Whafs more,along with there are .(原因二)However, .Therefore,rd like to suggest .(个人看法)
Best regards.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
[范文鉴赏]
Dear Editor-in-Chief,
Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirrora regular reader of your
•
newspaper.I like it very much mainly for following two reasons.Firstjt covers both national and international news so that,by simply turning the pages] can learn all important things that have happened during the week.Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people,which help me how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.(具体原因)
As a young student,! suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning,and I hope that it will become even more popular.(个人看法; 祝愿)
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【高考真题1】
[2023-北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上
海旅游,发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件,内容包括:
1.交通出行;
2.必备衣物。
注意:
1.词数不少于50;
2.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
【参考范文】Dear Jim,
Im pleased that youre coming to tour in China.
I suggest that you begin from Beijing, and T11 show stop. After that, you can go to Shanghai, where you can stay for a week. You can take high-speed
...
trains to both cities. Summer in these cities is hot and rainy, so take summer wear plus an umbrella
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】本文是一篇应用文,要求给朋友写回信。
【详解】红星中学高三学生李华的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游,发 来邮件询问相关信息。要求给他回复邮件,内容包括:1.交通出行;2.必备衣物。本文时态 应釆用一般现在时和一般将来时,用第一人称和第二人称来写。文章可以分为三部分来写: 首先表达欢迎Jim来中国;然后交代交通出行和必备衣物;最后盼望朋友的到来。注意使用 高级词汇和句式,为文章增添色彩;注意使用连接词、衔接词,使文章自然、流畅。
【点睛】本文内容完整,语言表述流畅。文章使用了几个高分句型o thatyou5re coming to tour in China.禾口 that you begin from Beijing, and Ill show you around.是宾语从句。 where you can stay for a week.是非限制性定语从句。
【高考真题】
[2023-天津卷】
假设你是晨光中学的李津,英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。
活动期间,英方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意 见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:
(1)你喜欢的讲座话题(从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一);
(2)选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容;
(3)希望从中有何收获。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100:
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾己给出、不计入总词数。
Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Jin
【写作思路】
这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
Im Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. I got the news that your school will send teachers to my school for a week-long summer exchange. During the activity, you will give a lecture on Western art. You want to seek for advice on what topic the lecture will be about. From my personal note, music is my priority.
I am interested in all kinds of music, among which Jazz is my favorite. I want to know about the history of jazz, and some famous jazz singers. I would appreciate it if you can add some sessions of enjoying jazz.
Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Jin
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