【简介】感谢网友“网络整理”参与投稿,这里小编给大家分享一些,方便大家学习。
中考英语作文许多学生经常会陷入“NOTHING TO SAY”的困境如何才能避免“无话可说”做到“言之有物”的同时还能拿到高分呢?今天豫见升学的小编总结了郑州中考英语作文评分标准+高分作文技巧各位家长注意点赞收藏,转发给学生判卷逻辑“一、评分原则1.本题总分为20分,按4 个档次给分。2.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。3.词数少于80和多于120的,从总分中减去2 分。4.评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6.如书写较差以至影响交际,将其分数降低一个档次。”“二、各档次的给分范围和要求第一档16~20完成了试题规定的任务覆盖所有内容要点;应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求;语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致;有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。达到了预期的写作目的第二档11~15分基本完成了试题规定的任务虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容;应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求;有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解;应用简单的语句间连接成分,使全文内容连贯。整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的第三档6~10分未恰当完成试题规定的任务漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容;语法结构单调,词汇项目有限;有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解;较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者第四档1~5分未完成试题规定的任务明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求;语法结构单调,词汇项目有限;较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解;缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者0分未能传达给读者任何信息内容太少,无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。”
分类作文提纲
一活动介绍类
首段:
(1) Im pleased to know that youre greatly interested in ..., so Id like to share a piece of good news that there will be a ... Now, let me offer you some useful information.
(2) Its my great honor to invite you to enter a ... Now, let me offer you some useful information about it.
(3) Its time for us to say goodbye to our school life soon. Surprisingly, there is a / an ... prepared for us. Now, let me offer you some information about it.
主体段:
1.时间&地点:The ... will be held in Classroom 302 at 3 oclock in the afternoon on June 8th,2023.
2.内容:(1)主题句:There will be various meaningful activities included in it.
(2)要点:First of all, You will be invited to .../ You will be given a chance to ... which will ...
After that, It will be more than interesting for you to .../ It will impress you a lot to ... so that ...
At last, doing sth, will play an important part in ... So ...
尾段:
Thats all. I firmly believe that if you join in it, you will ...
Thats all. I sincerely hope that you can come and share the happiness / fun with us.
二写人叙事类
首段:
(1)朋友:A friend in need is a friend indeed. I have a friend just like that who often offers me much warmth in my life. Let me introduce him to you.
(2)父母:If you ask me who is the most important one to me, without doubt, the answer is my ... Let me introduce him to you.
(3)老师:In both my life and study, my ... teacher is special to me because he is not only my teacher but also my friend who has made a great difference to my character.
主体段:
(1)外貌:... is very beautiful but a little fat with long hair and big eyes.
(2)性格:... is an outgoing woman who always gets along well with people around her./ ... is very kind to others and easy to get on with./ is so ready to help others that we all like to make friends with him.
(3)爱好:She is especially good at cooking and often cooks different delicious foods for me.
事例:
(1) Linda is like an angel. Whenever I meet trouble, she will always be there. When I fail my test, She always encourages me to face the fact bravely and then tries to help me to check the reason why I fail. At the same time, she shares her good ways of studying with me.
(2) My Chinese teacher, Ms Li, not only teaches us how to learn, but also teaches us how to be a person. I remember I made a serious mistakes in Grade seven, that was to copy others homework. Ms Li knew that. Instead of being angry with me, she told me the importance of study and encouraged me to study hard to become a talented person in the future.
(3) Last term, I failed my exam. I was so that that I cried sadly in my room. When my mother came from work late, she talked with me patiently and cheered me up. That evening, when I woke up at night, my mother was still working. I was deeply moved. Then I made up my mind to study harder than before.
尾段:
As a sunshine teenager, Xiao Hui is a good example for us to learn from./ I will treasure the friendship forever.
Now I understand my fathers love to me. I will never forget what my father did for me and try my best to make him pleased.
He is an excellent teacher I will never forget and love him forever.
三咨询建议类
首段:
Im sorry to hear that you have difficulty in doing ... Dont worry about it! Here are some useful suggestions Id like to share with you.
主体段:
1.主题句:Actually, if you are careful, youll find various simple ways to help you solve the problem.
2.要点:First and foremost, Its +adj / n+for / of sb. to do ... So that ...In addition, you are supposed to do ... which can not only ... but also ...Whats more, you had better (not) do ... because ...Last but not least, I suggest you (should) do ... from which, youre able to do ...
尾段:With these suggestions carried out, I firmly believe you will improve ... a lot.
I sincerely hope that my suggestions can be of great help. Looking forward to your earliest reply.
四观点看法类
首段:
With the development of the science and technology / society,... is becoming more and more serious./ the problem about ... is under a heated discussion /... has become a hot topic. As for that, there are different opinions among people.
主体段:
On the one hand, some people hold the idea that ... The reasons are as follows. First,... Second,... Last,...
On the other hand, others disagree. They suppose that ... Because ... More importantly,...
尾段:
As far as Im concerned, every coin has two sides, and ... is not an exception. As long as we treat ... properly, it will be of great help.
中考作文经典例句
一、常用的过渡语
1.表起始的过渡语:first of all, to begin with, first and foremost等。
2.表时间的过渡语:first, at first, then, later, in the end, finally, afterwards, after that, since then, for the first time, at last, as soon as, the next moment, meanwhile, later on, soon等。
3.表空间的过渡语:on the right / left, to the right / left of, on one side of … on the other side of …, at the foot / top / end of, in the middle / centre of, next to, far from, in front of等。
4.表因果的过渡语:for, since, as, because of, thus, so, as a result (of)等。
5.表转折的过渡语:but, yet, however, after all, in fact, while, on the contrary, instead of, although, otherwise, in spite of等。
6.表列举的过渡语:for example, such as, like, as follows, in other words, and so on等。
7.表推进的过渡语:on one hand … on the other hand…, in addition to, as well, still, also, in other words, not only … but also…, besides, in addition, furthermore, whats more, moreover等。
8.表总结的过渡语:in short, in a word, in general, in brief, in all, all in all, above all等。
二、常用句型
1.重点句型
1). Its adj for sb to do 做…对某人来说…
2).… so … that …如此…以至于…
… too … to do 太…而不能
… such … that …如此…以至于…
3). not … until …直到…才…
4). The reason why +句子 is that +句子…的原因是…
5). That is why +句子那是…的原因
6). That is because +句子那是因为…
7). It is said that +句子据说… It is reported that +句子据报道…
8). There is no doubt that +句子毫无疑问…
9). It goes without saying that +句子不言而喻,毫无疑问
10). There is no need to do 没必要做…
11). There is no point in doing 做某事毫无意义
2.提建议
had better (not) do 最好(不)做
Its +adj./ n. of / for sb. to do
I suggest that you (should) do 我建议你做…
be supposed to do 应该做
If I were you, I would do …我要是你的话,我会做…
Why not do / why dont you do …?为什么不…
How about / what about doing …怎么样?
3.表示喜欢和感兴趣
like / love doing = enjoy doing = be fond of doing 喜欢做…
prefer to do A rather than do B 宁愿做A也不愿做B
be interested in doing = show / take great interest in n / doing ...感兴趣
4.努力做
try to do 努力做…
try ones best to do = do ones best to do 竭尽全力做…
make efforts to do = make every effort to do 尽力做…
do what sb can (do ) to do 尽力做…
spare no effort to do 不遗余力的做…
do what / everything sb can to do 尽某人全力做…
5.打算做/ 计划做
intend / plan to do 打算做…
be going to do 打算/ 计划做…
decide to do 决定做…
determine to do 决定做…
make up ones mind to do 下定决心做…
6.表示想/ 希望
want to do = would like to do 想做…hope / wish to do 希望做… expect to do 期待着做…
7.只加doing作宾语的动词
finish / keep / practice / suggest / allow / consider / mind / miss / avoid / imagine / enjoy doing
来源:网络整理