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  I am a college student who wishes to apply for your recently advertised position for a staff member.

  Finally, I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to grant me an interview as soon as possible. At that time I could introduce myself in further details. I look forward to your reply.

  Yours sincerely,

  Li Ming

  考研英语作文批改点评如下:

  Dear Sir or Madam, I am a college student who wishes to apply for your recently advertised position for a staff member. I am sure that I am qualified for it. First, I once worked as a librarian in my college library. I have absoluted(拼写错误) much work experience from it. Second, not only do(这里应该用does) my experience make me a perfect candidate for it, my kindful(拼写错误) and friendly personality is well suited for the job. Third, my hobby is singing.(与申请工作没有关系) Finally, I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to grant me an interview as soon as possible. At that time I could introduce myself in further details. I look forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 点评:5-6分第一段写明你要申请的职位。然后分几条说明自己。要写对你申请工作最有帮助的几条内容。

  

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