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I have learned from my friend Tom of your vacancy for a secretary, and am therefore writing to apply for the position.
I am confident that my academic training has prepared me to handle this job. To begin with, I have a good command of professional knowledge and can speak English fluently. In addition, I gained much experience in my previous work. With my qualification and ability, I am convinced that I will make satisfactory contribution towards development of your company.
Im looking foward to an interview at your convenience. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear Sir or Madam, I have learned from my friend Tom of your vacancy for a secretary, and (建议加I)am therefore writing to apply for the position. I am confident that my academic training has prepared me to handle this job. To begin with, I have a good command of professional knowledge and (加I)can speak English fluently. In addition, I gained much experience in my previous work. With my qualification and ability, I am convinced that I will make satisfactory contribution towards (加定冠词the)development of your company. Im looking forward(拼写错误,forward) to an interview at your convenience. Thank you for your consideration. Yours Sincerely, Li Ming 点评:6分第二段的第二部分内容给人感觉很空旷,要让你的内容更加充实。
I have learned from my friend Tom of your vacancy for a secretary, and am therefore writing to apply for the position.
I am confident that my academic training has prepared me to handle this job. To begin with, I have a good command of professional knowledge and can speak English fluently. In addition, I gained much experience in my previous work. With my qualification and ability, I am convinced that I will make satisfactory contribution towards development of your company.
Im looking foward to an interview at your convenience. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear Sir or Madam, I have learned from my friend Tom of your vacancy for a secretary, and (建议加I)am therefore writing to apply for the position. I am confident that my academic training has prepared me to handle this job. To begin with, I have a good command of professional knowledge and (加I)can speak English fluently. In addition, I gained much experience in my previous work. With my qualification and ability, I am convinced that I will make satisfactory contribution towards (加定冠词the)development of your company. Im looking forward(拼写错误,forward) to an interview at your convenience. Thank you for your consideration. Yours Sincerely, Li Ming 点评:6分第二段的第二部分内容给人感觉很空旷,要让你的内容更加充实。