绝对精华！10年高考英语全国卷作文题+优秀范文汇总

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2023年的新高考试卷中，英语学科在试卷结构、命题趋向、题型设置、分值分布、考查侧重点等方面均呈现出了较大的变化。

英语试卷相关部分的题量和分值出现“两增一减”的变化。英语写作部分取消了短文改错题，保留了书面表达题，增加了读后续写题，提升了阅读理解和书面表达试题的分值与比重，更加注重了对阅读和写作的考查。

今天，为大家分享的是2010-2023年10年高考英语全国卷作文题+优秀范文汇总，马上收藏起来，好好梳理学习哦！（文末打印版）

1.2010年全国卷 I

【作文题目】

假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛(speech contest)，希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。

英语演讲比赛

主题：人与自然

时间：6月15日下午2:00--5:00

地点：501教室

参赛选手：10名学生

联系人：李华（电话44876655）

欢迎大家光临

注意：词数100左右。

优秀范文

Dear Ms. Smith,

Im Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union of Yucai Middle School, which is close to your university. Im writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 15. It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic "Man and Nature". We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions.

I am looking forward to your reply.

With best wishes,

Li Hua

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2.2010年全国卷 II

【作文题目】

假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter曾表示希望来中国教书。你校现需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告知招聘信息。内容主要包括：

1. 教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等

2. 授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础）

3. 工作量：每周12学时，任选三门课；担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问（advisor）

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。

优秀范文

Dear Peter,

I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. Our school now is looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to senior high students. If you come, you can choose three of the following four courses: Speaking, Writing,BritainToday and America Today, and teach 12 hours a week. The students who are going to take these courses have at least three years of English learning experiences. Besides teaching, you will also work as an advisor to our students’ English club or our school’s English newspaper.

Please let me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions. I’d be more than happy to help.

Best,

Li Hua

3.2011年新课标 I

【作文题目】

假设你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心（Learning Center）的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：

1．本人简介；

2．求助内容；

3．约定时间；

4．你的联系方式（Email：lihua@1236.com；phone：12345678）。

注意：

1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．结束语已为你写好。

优秀范文

Dear Sir / Madam,

Im Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. Im writing to ask for help. I came here last month and found my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and Im anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. You may email or phone me. Here are my email address and phone number: lihua@1236.com; 12345678.

Look forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

4.2011年新课标 II

【作文题目】假定你是李华，你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括：

1．说明你是该报的忠实读者

2．赞赏该报优点：

1)兼顾国内外新闻

2)介绍名人成功故事

3．提出建议：刊登指导英语学习的文章

注意：

1. 词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

优秀范文

Dear Editor-in-Chief,

Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!

I’m a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.

As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning, and I hope that it will become even more popular.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

5.2023年新课标 I

【作文题目】

假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。

内容主要包括：

1. 自我介绍(包括英语能力)

2. 参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家)

3. 希望获准。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。

优秀范文

Dear Sir or Madam,

Im Li Hua, a middle school student fromChina. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and Id like to take part in it. Ive been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, IlI be able to tell students from other countries aboutChinaand learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.

Looking forward to your reply!

Regards,

Li Hua

6.2023年新课标 II

【作文题目】假定你是李华。你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教Susan参加，要点包括：

1. 时间：周五晚8点至9点

2. 地点：学生俱乐部

3. 内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等

4. 要求：备小礼物

注意：

1. 词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3. 答案必须写在答题卡相应的位置上。

优秀范文

Hi, Susan,

Were throwing a surprise party for Xiaomings birthday. Wed like to invite you to the party. We want to give him a surprise, so please keep quiet about it. Well gather at the Students Club at 8 pm this Friday, after the evening classes. And its going to last about an hour. We each will prepare a little present. When he comes, well light the candles and sing "Happy Birthday" together for him. Then the cake will be cut and well sing songs and play games. Itll be nice to see how excited he will be. Im sure youll have a good time at the party, too.

Yours,

Li Hua

7.2023年新课标 I

【作文题目】假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：

李明：高个子，戴眼镜

航班号：CA985

到达：8月6日上午11:30

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。

优秀范文

Dear Peter,

How are you doing?

I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.

Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to theU.S.? Thank you in advance!

His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in a blue jacket.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

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8.2023年新课标 II

【作文题目】假定你是李华，自制了一些中国结(Chinese knot)。给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信，请他代卖，要点包括：

1. 外观(尺寸、颜色、材料)

2. 象征意义

3. 价格

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头已为你写好。

优秀范文

Dear Tom,

How are you doing? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. InChina, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck.

People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. They are only 12.99 US dollars each. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me. Also, do let me know if you need further information.

Thank you!

Li Hua

9.2023年全国卷（新课标 I）

假定你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内容）。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 参考词汇：住宿--accommodation

优秀范文

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.I’ve seen your ad,and I’d like to know something more about your six-week English course.First,when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week?Besides,I wish there would not be too many students in a class.I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be host family or university dormitory?

I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

10.2023年全国卷（新课标II/大纲）

一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。

1. 家庭；

2. 工作；

3. 业余生活。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头语已为你写好。

I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. ...

优秀范文

I often imagine what my life would be like in the future . I think my life will be very different in ten years .i will be twenty –eight years old by then . I will have my own family , probably with a lovely child . I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer . I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues . I’will do a good job in whatever I do .In my free time , I will continue to take regular exercise , such as swimming , running and various ball games . On my holidays , I will travel around the world .In a word , my life will be much richer and more colorful .

11.2023年全国卷 I

假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：

1. 栏目介绍；

2. 稿件内容；

3. 稿件长度：约400词；

4. 交稿日期：6月28日前。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头语已为你写好。

Dear Peter,

I’d like to ask you to write anarticle for our schools English newspaper. ...

优秀范文

Dear Peter,

Id like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.

The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?

I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,Li Hua

12.2023年全国卷II

假定你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人们过重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）。请给外教Lucy写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：

1. 出发及返回时间；

2. 活动：包饺子、表演节目等。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 结语已为你写好。

优秀范文

Dear Lucy,

Id like toinvit you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.

Its the day for the elderly in our culture. Well go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly there. Well also spend some fun time together singing,dancing and playing games, which I hope will make them happy. We should be back around 4 oclock in the afernoon.

If you are able to come with us, please let me know and well wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

13.2023年全国卷 I

假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

优秀范文

Dear Ms Jenkins,

I’m writing to ask you for help. I’m applying for a part-time job in a overseas-funded corporation. I think it’ll be a new challenge to me. Moreover, by doing the part-time job I can get some precious experience so that I can better adapt to the development and changes of society.

I’ve already written the application and resume. But I’m afraid that there are some mistakes about the words and format. So I have no choice but to bother you to correct my mistakes in the material I attach to the letter. I’d appreciate it if you could do me a favor.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

14.2023年全国卷II

假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学生摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括：

1. 主题：环境保护；

2. 展览时间；

3. 投稿邮箱：intlphotoshow@gmschool.com。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

优秀范文

Dear Peter,

Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last three weeks. Any students who is interested in welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and youve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to.

Hope to hear from you soon.

Yours

Li Hua

15.2023年全国卷III

假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.表示歉意；2.说明原因；3.另约时间。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

优秀范文

Dear Bob,

I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.

Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.

Yours,

Li Hua

16.2023全国卷 I

假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：1、时间和地点;2、内容：学习唐诗;3、课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。

注意：1、词数100左右；

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

优秀范文

Dear Leslie,

How are you? Glad to see you have made some progress in Chinese learning and I’m writing to tell you something about our next lesson.

The lesson will be given from 3 pm to 5 pm on the afternoon of next Tuesday in the classroom 502. In the class, you will mainly learn Tang Poetry, which reflects traditional Chinese culture and is deeply loved by Chinese. You can feel the beauty of Chinese by learning Tang Poetry. You’d better make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the history of Tang Dynasty, which makes it easy for you to go through the class.

If there is anything that I can help you, please don’t hesitate to tell me. Looking forward to meeting you.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

17.2023全国卷 II

假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1、展览时间、地点；2、展览内容。

注意：1、词数100左右；

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

优秀范文

Dear Henry,

I’m Li Hua, the leader of the paper-cutting club in our school. Last time you told me you looked forward to learning more about traditional Chinese culture. Now I’m glad to tell you there will be a Chinese paper-cutting exhibition held by our school. I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for the art feast.

The exhibition, the theme of which is “beauty of China”, will take place in the school hall from 2 to 5 on the afternoon of June 21. Not only will our club’s works be displayed, but we also have a valuable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist of this field. Besides, there will be a lot of usefuland interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture.

I would appreciate it if you accept my invitation. I’m sure it can leave a wonderful impression on you! I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

18.2023全国卷I

假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗，请你回复邮件，内容包括：

1.到达时间；

2.合适的礼物；

3.餐桌礼仪。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

优秀范文

Dear Terry,

How are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to a Chinese friend’s home. Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.

To begin with, according to our tradition, you are supposed to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare the dinner, which is meaningful and interesting. Besides, you’d better bring some gifts, like a book or a Chinese knot. What’s more, when you are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises while chewing food.

Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.

Best wishes!

Yours,

LiHua

19.2023全国卷 II

你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则英文通知，请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Together，内容包括：

1.短片内容：学校的发展；

2.放映时间、地点；

3.欢迎对短片提出意见。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

优秀范文

Notice

In order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from 2:30 to 4:00in the afternoon on June 9th. It is organized by the Student Union.Here are some relevant details about it.

To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the development of our beloved school.As we all expect, it will be not only eaningful but also interesting. What’s more, everyone of you will be welcome to take part (participate) in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.

The Student Union

June 8, 2023

20.2023全国卷 III

假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况，请给他回信，内容包括：

1.学校的体育场馆；

2.主要的运动项目；

3.你喜欢的项目。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

优秀范文

Dear Peter,

I am sodelighted tohave received your letter. You asked me in your last letter about theme physical exercise in our school and the following information may give yousomehelp.

To my great joy, a famous new stadium has been put up, which has become the landmark in our school. Besides, with the stadium built, a wide range of sports activities can be carried out, of whichtable tennis, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. I am particularly fond of basketball because it has been giving me strength to confront the challenge in my life.

Finally, I sincerely invite you to visit our school and join in the sports we both like.

Yours,

Li Hua

21.2023全国卷 I

【题目要求】

假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：

1．写信目的：2．个人优势：3．能做的事情。

注意：

1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．结束语已为你写好。

优秀范文

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation. I’m delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery. Now I’m writing to apply for the position.

The reasons for my application are as follows. First of all, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English. What’s more, years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order. The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form.

All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.

Yours,

Li Hua

22.2023全国卷 II

【题目要求】

假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括：

1. 比赛信息；

2. 赛前准备；

3. 表达期待。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Dear Chris,

How is everything going? I have good news to tell you. A volleyball match is going to be held in a few weeks and our team will participate.

As for the detailed information of the match, there will be probably dozens of teams which are going to make a revolving competition. Additionally, not only can the top three teams each be awarded a medal but all the other teams taking part in it will get a reward as well. What will be the most attractive is that it will be a great honor for the top three teams to receive special volleyballs that have the name of the most popular volleyball player on them. Therefore, we must do enough preparations before the match, such as training as frequently as we can.

So excited am I that I can’t wait to join in it.How about you? Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

23.2023全国卷 III

【题目要求】

假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：

1. 时间；

2. 活动安排；

3. 欢迎他表演节目。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Dear Allen,

How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And I’m writing to invite you to join us.

The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

24.2023全国卷 I

第二节书面表达(满分25分)

你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：

1. 人物简介;

2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。

注意：

1. 词数100左右;

2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。

优秀范文

Mr. Liu, aged 58, is my English teacher. He is so humorous, responsible andselfless that I respect and love him very much.

To be honest, his assistance has a great impact on me. It was Mr. Liu whomade me perceive the importance of learning English well. Had it not been forhis guidance and encouragement, I couldnt have won the first place in the cityEnglish speech contest. Without his aid, I wouldnt have boosted my integratedskills in English. Ill definitely remember his kindness and help forever.

Mr. Liu is a very respectable teacher indeed! I do thank him for what hedid for me. (111 words)

25.2023全国卷Ⅱ

上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括：

1. 农场情况；

2. 采摘过程；

3. 个人感受

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 题目已为你写好。

题目：My Weekend

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My Weekend

Organized by the student union, a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend. The farm is situated at the foot of a mountain, the sky is blue and the air is fresh. We were attracted by the beautiful scenery. There are different kinds of fruit trees as well as a variety of animals.

On arriving, we saw red ripe peaches hanging on the tree. Using baskets and ladders, We first picked the ones that were most beautiful in color, then those that were ripe and soft. I couldn’t wait to take a bite, and the sweet juice went down my throat.

I was grateful for this opportunity to get close to nature. Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking, but I could also feast on the sweetness!

26.2023全国卷Ⅲ

假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教MissEvans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:

1.剧情简介;

2.指导内容;

3.商定时间地点。

注意:

1.词数100左右

2.结束语已为你写好。

优秀范文

Dear Miss Evans,

How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook.

We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details?

Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look forward to your early reply. Best regards!

Yours truly,

Li Hua

27.2023新高考全国卷Ⅰ

阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。

The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.

Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them.

One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. The little boy -his name was Bernard-had interested her very much.

“I wish you could see him,” she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara. “He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I dont see what he can do.”

After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. “I wish we could help him to earn money,” said Clara. “His family is suffering so much.”

“So do I,” said Harry. “We really should do something to assist them.”

For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, “I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish(完成).”

The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a good one. “I tell you what we can do,” said John. “You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us? Well, we can make popcorn(爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.”

注意:

1. 续写词数应为150左右:

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

When Mrs. Meredith heard of Johns idea, she thought it was a good one, too.

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With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.

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段落大意答案

本段大意：

Meredith一家所住社区的现状，经济情况不好，很多人过得很艰难，大家都相互帮助。

本段大意：

Meredith很善良。尽力帮助那些穷人。

本段大意：

一个生病穷人的家庭状况，非常困难，急需用钱，但是没有劳动力。尤其是名叫Bernard男孩。

“I wish you could see him,” she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara. “He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I dont see what he can do.”

本段大意：

Meredith希望自己的孩子能去看看那家穷人，想办法帮助他们。

After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. “I wish we could help him to earn money,” said Clara. “His family is suffering so much.”

本段大意：

Meredith的孩子想办法帮助那个小男孩Bernard挣钱。

“So do I,” said Harry. “We really should do something to assist them.”

For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, “I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish(完成).”

本段大意：

John想出了一个可以帮助Bernard的办法。

本段大意：

John想出了的办法就是制作爆米花让Bernard 拿出去卖。

全文主题：

Meredith如何通过制作和卖爆米花帮助Bernard一家摆脱困境的。

开头语分析

When Mrs. Meredith heard of John’s idea, shethought it was a good one, too.

当Meredith太太听到John的主意时，她也认为这是个好主意

可以针对如何实现制作爆米花这个提议展开构思；

With everything ready, Bernard started out onhis new business.

一切准备就绪后，Bernard开始了他的新生意

可以针对Bernard如何通过卖爆米花让家庭摆脱困境展开构思。

优秀范文

When Mrs. Meredith heard of John’s idea, she thought it was a good one, too. So, they went to the local supermarket together. They bought a bag of corn and some special bags for popcorn. When they got home, they made a lot of popcorn and put it in the special bags. With the popcorn, they went to Bernard’s home. They told Bernard how to sell the popcorn. Bernard and his parents were very grateful. And the Meredith family also felt very happy to help this family.

With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. He took the popcorn around to the houses and sold all his popcorn. He earned a lot of money. Then, he wanted to be self-dependent. Therefore, he asked Mrs. Meredith to teach him how to make popcorn. After that, not only did he sell popcorn, but he also added cream and salt to the popcorn to make it taste better. Bernard grew up to be a remarkable man. He did not forget the help of Meredith’s family, and he also did what he could to help those in need.

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